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Hello! I'm a video game researcher from New York who travels a lot for work and pleasure. I have spent a lot of my "trying" to learn a handful of languages with no success. I'm originally from Colombia but I have been just shy of fluency in Spanish for a long time, even though I minored in it and studied in Spain for six months, Argentina for one, and have visited Colombia many times. I also took French for three years, at one point becoming fully conversational, but I've lost a lot of that too. Finally, I visited Germany for the first time and fell in LOVE with the language... so I have my eyes set on that as well! I'm quite ambitious about becoming a polyglot and am tired of the excuses and setbacks. Hopefully you can help me reach my goals in one of the three languages I hope to learn! Gracias! Merci! Danke!
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    The Process of Rain

    Rain is a natural phenomenon caused when the water up in the sky lands on earth land.
    Rain come from waters, in rivers, swamps, and etc. The waters evaporates into the sky and becomes a some cloud. With the help of the wind, the clouds move into the place where the temperature is lower and creates moisture. Because it's the moisture is too heavy, water droplets fall to the earth's surface.

     

    -"phenomena" is plural -- "phenomenon" is singular

    -no need for "and" before "etc."

    -"water" is usually used -- you use "waters" usually when you are talking about the ocean (e.g., "He sailed the open waters.")

     

    Hope that helps :)

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    Who I am

    I was born in 1990 in a city in the south of Italy. 

    I am at the university studying to become a nurse with my beautiful girlfriend who I met for the first time four years ago. I'm interested in learning English very well and, above all, speaking fluently.
    I hope that someone can help me on this thing!

     

    Great job! I think some of my corrections were just typos but I figured I would correct everything just in case :) 

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    Je recommence... Bonjour! Je suis ici pour prqctiquer mon français... Prémiere, j'utilise un clavier français pour ça entrée et c'est très difficile parce que je suis accoutumé à le clavier QWERTY en anglais et est un peu différent... Je suis un peu nerveuse aussi parce que je ne veux pas semble stupide en français ici. Mais je suis très enthousiaste pour finalment apprendre et prqctiquer français!
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