I'm not even sure who is in the running.  What is your opinion?

my hobbies

hi, today I will to talk about my hobbies, the most of time most of the time I am at University but in my free time I I like doing different things.
I enjoy talking with my friends,spending time with my family,walking in the city, and reading books, (start new sentence) I also like dancing.
capitalize the first word of sentences one of the things that i enjoy a lot is meeting new people and cultures, (start a new sentence) I think it allows you to open your mind and to have a encourages personal growth.

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my day

I went to work early in the morning today because I had to finish something.something to finish. It has been a difficult day because I had to do many things within a short period of time. ib a few time. Life in a lawfirm is stressfull. Personally, I think working quickly and efficiently efficatly is the key to success.

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A hard working day.

Both yesterday and today have been super busy for me.  My schedule has been totally filled! I am  totally exhausted because of how much physical work I have been doing.  I have been carrying a bunch of heavy bags and I haven't even had time to eat or rest.  I have not had enough time to concern myself with my studies.  Even though I have been busy, I remain quite happy. I'm such a silly hard-working man!

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What is the most difficult part of learning English?

English isn’t my mother tongue.

So On the whole, it is difficult to learn English in Korea, especially pronounciation and conversation.

English is a language so that it requires lots of practice to speak fluently

but The korean style of education has put an excessive emphasis on grammar.

Many exams about English are fill in the blanks.

I was very confused about the latest speaking craze because I have been used to these types of exams.

I have almost never spoken in English.

To speak foreign languages fluently and take an interest in it, you have to learn and use the expressions. It requires to create an environments which encourages you to use English.

For this reason, many college students spend their time and money to go abroad for language training. But I can’t afford the money to go on language training, therefore t make me to I study English in relatively limited situations.

Fortunately, there is are quite a few native speakers in korea.

The most substantial and realistic way to improve my English is to is that I gonna be a language exchange partner with these native speakers.

I will have to think about how to I meet them and propose it.

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New year

Friend, it is interesting me.when you have in your country a new year?

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Hello friends!  It would be interesting to me to know how you celebrate New Years in your country.  Please share your customs with me.  

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