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Mi Mejor Amiga!
Mi mejor amiga se llama Grace. Ella es muy guapa bonita [bonito es para lugares u objetos]. Es una rubia con ojos azules, y es la persona más simpática os podríais encontrar ustedes encontraría! [usted es muy forma, no encaja en este texto] Ella es animadora. Yo [en español se omite siempre que se puede "yo"]era animadora como ella, pero este año ya no lo soy porque el año pasado, me lesioné lastimé! Yo espero que no se lesione lastime. No creo que pase pienso pasará!
Además, ella es inteligente. Tiene buenas notas en sus exámenes. Pero, ella no es una buena estudiante en la clase de español! Tengo que ayudarle en esta clase, pero no hay ningún problema, porque me encanta pasar tiempo con mi amiga, incluso si es para ayudarle con la escuela!
Gracias por sus correcciones!Buen trabajo :)
0 votedAugust 15, 20170Muy señores míos,<o:p></o:p>
Soy estudiante de tercer curso de Grado de Administración y Gestión de las Empresas en la universidad de Paris-Est Créteil, y me gustaría realizar las prácticas de empresa en el extranjero. Su empresa me ha llamado la atención. Por lo que me presento mi candidatura para realizar este periodo de prácticas de 3 meses en su empresa, a partir de Mayo 2016. Me gustaría trabajar en España para mejorar mi español, y porque me gusta mucho la cultura Española.<o:p></o:p>
Es un periodo de práctica de gestión de las empresas, por lo que puedo ayudar a hacer todas diferentes tareas, esencialmente tareas administrativas y.<o:p></o:p>
0 votedFebruary 1, 20160Por mi parte me comprometo a prestar el máximo interés en mi trabajo y no dejaré de esforzarme en aplicar inmediatamente lo aprendido, intentando prestar así una ayuda. Soy una persona entusiasta, comprometida con mi trabajo. Pienso que mi gran voluntad me ayudará a integrarme dentro del equipo humano de su empresa.<o:p></o:p>
Les agradezco el tiempo invertido en leer mi carta de presentación y mi CV. Quedo a su entera disposición para cualquier información complementaria que me requieran, y espero que será de interés.<o:p></o:p>
A la espera de su repuesta, les saluda atentamente
0 votedFebruary 1, 20160- Please correct this An offshore oil platform is a large structure, attached to the Bed Sea, provided with all the facilities and devices required in drilling wells, extracting and processing different fossil fuels, such as oil or natural gas. Some of the most dangerous jobs are oil industry and offshore stations. In consequence, working in an offshore oil platform is plenty of hazards, and any staff has to be really careful to avoid and prevent accidents. The main hazards are the bad conditions outside, such as cold, cloudy, rainy or windy weather; and the uses of toxic and flammable fluids. In order to prevent accidents is important to ensure that the staff avoids any unsafe situation. To prevent to fall down from the base to the water, a safe net and hand railing should be installed, furthermore, it is recommended that any staff working outside, when bad weather conditions, wears a harness and lifejacket. To prevent for fires, and toxic liquids or fumes, it is required to install a large system of detectors to monitoring the air quality and temperature in the whole station, paying special attention to small and confined spaces. The system should include alarms, ventilation to work in case of accident. Thanks for your corrections forehand!May 19, 201510
- Geothermal Energy. Please correct it This text is supposed to be the transcription of an oral presentation, so I'm sorry if it is a mess and you don't understand it. However, I'd be please if you could correct any mistake. Thanks forehand. Hello, I'll talk to you about Geothermal Energy, also, I'll focus on applications in HVAC and DHW. Geothermal Energy is the thermal energy generated and stored in the Earth. We can see here a classification of the different geothermal sources by temperature and applications for each one. However, we're focusing on very low temperature source, since it is the only one we can find easily in Spain. Geothermal Power Plants are not very important, as there are not more than 10 GB installed. However, it is important in countries like Iceland, El Salvador or the Philippines. There are two different kinds of Geothermal Power Plants. Here we can see that we use the dry steam from the ground directly. When the ground cannot supply dry steam a heat exchanger is required, as it is shown in the picture. When we don't have neither a working fluid nor enough temperature, we have to work with brine and a geothermal heat pump to increase o decrease the temperature. I'll explain briefly the different configurations exist in ground heat exchangers. The ground loops can be open or closed. The most common used in Spain is the closed one, since it is not easy to find underground water. Furthermore, if we compared vertical and horizontal loops, we'd find that even vertical one is much more expensive, it is commonly used, as horizontal one has significant handicaps. You might be wondering if a geothermal heat pump can be used in any kind of building. Let me say that it is. I have differents examples to show you that. A bank's new headquarters, a block of flats and a detached house. The three projects in Madrid, by the way.May 4, 201510
- Please correct it. Engineering design The main topic of the video is how has changed the engineering design in the last century. It explains that engineering design is influenced by politics, wars and great achievement. Being the main languages using in engineering design publications, the speaker examines the different tents of different languages from the First World War to nowadays. In 1917, due to the First War War the number of publications drop, however, few years later, after the Russian Civil War finished, engineering publications increased in that country. During the Second World War, in the most of countries the publications descended, but in Japan. After the first nuclear weapon demonstration, and also because of the space race, the publications in Russia were raised. In the last years, new topics has become important, e.g. Final Element Methods. At the end, the speaker says that the most important language nowadays is English, mainly in business and technology.March 19, 201540
