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- Do you agree with the following statement? Professional athletes do not deserve the high salaries? (I decided to participate in TOFEL recently,so this is my first practice in respect of the topic above.I want some native speaker to give me some useful suggestions) Under cameras and videos, those famous professional athletes are becoming increasingly closer to us than they used to be, and their luxurious life are unfolded in front of us—high income, expensive cars and even scandals like drug using and gambling, triggering great controversy among people about whether they deserve such high salaries. They come under fire from many people who assert that it is really unfair for them to receive extremely high income compare with common people. However, with an utterly opposite opinion, I firmly concede that they deserve it. High salaries function as a compensation to their efforts and their crucial economic source. We can imagine how much laborious work they have done to achieve today’s attainments, at which point nobody denies that they choose to become athletes at the expense of sacrificing their time, education or even health at the adolescence. With not longer than 20 years in their career, simply the most optimistic estimation, it brings into question what they live on once they retire. In the absence of knowledge and other basic skills, they are less competent to find jobs, which is proved by the cases of many retiring athletes especially in some developing countries, who are struggling in poverty and unemployment. It is thus nothing but high salaries at present to provide athletes with enough funds to afford further education or pioneer their own business at the time of retirement in the future. I embrace another faith that it is the market that never fails to give its fairest justifications, including high salaries for professional athletes. There exists a invisible market mechanism that determines how much their value is. With rise of audience ratings as well as the involvement of commerce, sports tends to become increasingly profitable. For instance, NBA, representing the highest level of basketball in the world, has signed a broadcasting contract at the price of 24 billion dollars this year, an really astronomical figure. Such astounding profitability should be ascribed in a great proportion to those NBA superstars like Kobe Bryant and LeBron James, who have created such a great value. Therefore, it is rather convincing that they deserve high salaries as a reward, otherwise, the balance will be tilted in favor of capital instead of labor.December 21, 201400
你在未來想要跟你的生活做什麼?
在未來...我打算成為一名建築師,可是我覺得我還有很多時間決定.因為我喜歡學(In chinese,"学“is not necessary.You can just express your opinion as in chinese"我喜欢哲学”)哲學,并且(a conjunction can't be omitted there)我希望我的寫作變得更好.我在未來可能不会(“可能”here indicates a kind of possibility and "不要“ means not want.Nevertheless,it is odd that "可能”and"不要“ emerge together,because when you use "不要”,your attitude is resolute which contradicates "可能“ denoting possibilities.Thus,you'd better adopt"不会”which means can not or"不想“which means would not)成為一名建築師,可能只(here "只”means only,so you should put it in front of the "会“,which reverses the English convention.)会成為只一個設計師.
可是,這個只是一生(“生涯”is a noun signifies a period of time when you are occupied in something like football,solider or some jobs.And furthermore,“生涯”have to follow another noun like"职业生涯“ or"足球生涯” so that it can not be used independently。“一生"here means your lifetime)的決定,也是建立一個家最重要的事情, 但是(but)這也是最難打算的事情,也是有一些最(In chinese,"最+adjective"is the superior form of one adjective,before which you can't add any adverb to modify it)難的決斷.是0 votedAugust 5, 20140
