Here is my student's speech on graduation party.

Here is my student's speech on graduation party.
If there are errors , let me know plz
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Hello, how are you ? I'm Soo Yeon.
I'm so happy to be here with you tonight.
My friends and I are ready for dances and play. we've tried to spend a lot of time preparing for this show.
I hope you enjoy this show, please give us a big hand that make us excited more.

and here is my word , i'm going to tell you my dream.
I wanna be a good teacher as my school teachers when i grow up .
can you guess why i decided to be a teacher ?
Because of all my school teachers .
They always keep smile , very kind ,encourge us and lead in a good way.
I love all teachers. and they love me ,too.

unfortunately , few days later
I'll leave my school. I can't forget what teachers have done for me.
I promise I'm gonna be a better girl followed all the lessons from our teachers.

thank you teachers , thank you mom and dad !
please keep your eyes on this show.
Thank you .

으리 is popurlar word in korea shows these day .

just put 으리 in end of the words that end with 리 like 싹쓸이(싹스으리 is not correct) , 항아리, 페라리 ...

actually 으리 is 의리 .

의리 means loyalty in korean.

싹쓸이 means  similar with clean out . for example ,

"The robbers cleaned out the store.

and you can use 싹쓸이 like :

너 이거 어디서 싹쓸이 해왔니 ?

I think this has nagative meaning .

so you have to be care using it.

you can use this word for fun to ur friends .

and 잘놀아요 .

in korea, we don't use like 잘놀아요.

i recommend to use  재미있게 놀아 .

if you want to say good bye , just 안녕( bye) ,또  연락해 ( keep in touch) or 잘지내 (see you)

i hope it can help you !

인사 Basic Greeting

안녕하세요
제 이름은 저스틴입니다.
미국에서 왔고 한국어를 배우고 있습니다.
한국 영화하고(와) 음악을 좋아해서 작년 팔월부터 한국어를 공부하기 시작했슴(습)니다.
취미가 스키 타는 것입니다.(제 취미는 스키를 타는 것입니다.) 스키 타는 걸 아주 좋아해서 겨울은 제 제일 좋아하는 계절입니다. (스키 타는걸 아주 좋아해서 저는 겨울을 가장 좋아합니다.)

TTMIK이라는 웹 사이트에서 많이 공부했는데(고) 한국어를 잘 할 수있는(하는) 사람을 찾고 있습니다. 한국어를 잘 할 수있는 사람하고(과) 같이(함께) 공부하고 싶습니다.

nicely done !