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Hi! I'm a Masters student living in the United Kingdom. I love languages, and having recently returned from an exchange where I made lots of Hungarian friends, I have decided to learn Magyar. I'm looking for native or C-level speakers of Hungarian to chat with on Skype, to practise new Hungarian phrases as I acquire them. I'm also interested in talking to native/C-level German speakers. If anybody has either of these languages and would like to improve their English, please get in touch. I'd be happy to Skype, and to correct either spoken or written English.
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    Hello!

    Hello! It's my first entry narrative on this site. I very want to study the english language every much. I hope with your help it will be fast and interestingly! Thank you in advance for your partnership.

     

    Well done!

    Some notes: When a word is a contraction ('it's' instead of 'it is') we use an apostrophe to signify the missing letter(s)

    'Narrative' is a very formal word, usually used by literature students analysing plot structures and things like that - 'entry' is much less scholarly, and is used more often than 'narrative' in everyday contexts

    Your second sentence, even with my corrections, sounds quite formal - we would probably just say 'I really want to study English'

    'Interesting' is the adjective form, whereas 'interestingly' is the adverb - a quick way to recognise it is to remember that adverbs always end in -ly

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    gender proportion of students in each university subject

    Whether universities should accept equal numbers of male or female students in each subject is a much-debated issue. Some people claim that women should not be discriminated against in some subjects that used to be male-dominanted subjects, such as architecture and electronics. Whereas some people insist that universities’ enrollment should be based on a fairly justified standard in spite of the consideration of gender ratio.

    In my view, universities should select the students who indeed suit the subject he/she applied to, even if it may lead to unequal proportions of male and female students in the subject. Arguably [note: you had 'sheer' here, i wasn't quite sure what you meant...'arguably' is something you say when you're putting forward your view, but you accept there could be other views] there is no exact fairness between two genders in some particular subjects or professions. For instance, architecture companies do prefer male employees to female. Even though architecture graduates from universities consist of equal proportion of male and female students, the majority of students who successfully gain a job to enter this profession career [use 'profession' or 'career', but not both] are still men. As a consequence, female architecture students tend to be confronted with unemployment after they graduate. Therefore, to avoid scenes like that, of paramount importance is that universities would be advised to accept students whose characteristic and talents match the subject well.

    Admittedly, equal number of male and female students in a subject may probably improve the absence of lectures and enhance fun of university life. However, the first priority of universities is to cultivate qualified graduates to the society.

    Generally ['generally' makes sense, but 'in conclusion' might be better, if you're summing up - this is what you would say to introduce a summary of findings at the end of an essay, for instance] , it is not necessary to let equal number of male and female students enroll to every subject in university.

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    July 23, 2014
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    Magyar, második nap. Jó napot kívánok! Sarah vagyok és én Angliából. Én vagyok hallgató, én tanulás irodalom. Én tanulás Magyar, mert van Magyar barátai.
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