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Hallo! Mein name ist ren. Ich übe eine einfache deutsche Absatz zu schreiben.Dies ist mein erstes Mal, um einen Text zu schreiben Deutsch.Ich hoffe, dass es so gut ausfallen.Ich glaube, ich neeed mehr Praxis zu diesem Thema.Ich muss mich mit Worten und ihrer Bedeutung vertraut zu machen.
Hallo! Mein name ist Ren. Ich übe das Schreiben eines einfachen Absatzes auf Deutsch._Das ist mein erster Versuch._Ich hoffe, dass ich nicht viele Fehler gemacht habe._Ich brauche aber unbedingt mehr Praxis um besser zu werden._Ich muss mich mit Wörtern und ihrer Bedeutungen vertraut zu machen.
0 votedApril 1, 20150Food around the world
Hello everybody!
Today, I would like to write about food. I like coooking, I´m learning(learned) many things about cooking because I live alone since I was 20, so, for me, it´s a necessarry thing jejeje.
I knew some basics things about food, like put(putting) on(cancel that "on") salt or pepper to(onto) the salads,("or" instead of the comma) put(adding) on(cancel the "on) olive(s) in the("to" instead of in the) some plates, but i really did not know (add "how) to cook.
When I left to (moved out from) my parent´s house, I started to watch some videos in (on)the internet, where I discovered a fews famous cookers(chefs), so I started to learn very much.
Nowadays, I usually cook for my wife and for me diary, but sometimes I also for my friends, and the most import think is I really enjoy much making new dishes, because, when I´m at home and I have a little free time, I often watch videos about popular cooker called "Jamie´s Oliver", where I learn much.(Try to write shorter sentences! Not all mistakes are highlighted ;)
[ Nowadays, i usully cook for my wife and me. On special occastions i like to cook for my friends too. I do this because i really enjoy creating and cooking new dishes. I get the inspiration for these new dishes by watching my favourite chef Jamie Oliver cook on his show. I already learned a lot from him.]
Finally, I considere food is a special reason for to have relations with people in general, meeting friends and celebrating special ocassions.[In my opinion, cooking and food in general are excellent ways of strenghting the bonds between you and another person. You could even meet new people through cooking together or you might simply want to celebrate with your friends.]
Best regards!
José Antonio.0 votedJuly 30, 20142Traveling
Well, I love traveling. I want to know all those paradises, beachs and mountains and everything that I've seen in pictures. When I see those hidden islands like the Marietas's island in Mexico....woaaaa. I want to be there. I'd always wanted to wake up in the morning, open my eyes and see the beautiful sea in front of me (the beautiful sea), while hearing the birds or something like that. So..for the next year, I'm planning to travel to the EU, but I don't know exactly where I should go...I would be grateful if you could give me a tipp on where to go after correcting my text.
In germany there would be Schloss Neuschwanstein as one option ;) It's a really beautiful castle in the mountains
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