Could you correct these sentences?
I admire my teacher for these reasons: he is really passionate about music and students, I realized my weakness thanks to him, and then I decided to be a teacher like him. If I had not met him, I wouldn’t have been who I am now. Admiration can be a big power. Even though I face something hard for me, I can endure them and find solutions. Respecting person shouldn’t be a teacher, but I recommend you should have a person who you respect. It’ll support and encourage you to achieve your goal.
I admire my teacher for these reasons: he is really passionate about music and students, I realized my weakness weaknesses thanks to him, and then I decided to be a teacher like him. If I had not met him, I wouldn't have been be who I am now. Admiration can be a big power. Even though I face something hard for me, I can endure them it and find solutions. Respecting person shouldn’t be a teacher, It would be better to say:
It doesn't have to be a teacher that you respect
but I recommend you should have a person who you respect. It’ll support and encourage you to achieve your goal.
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