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the best person to love
The best person to love The Best Person to Love
In my mind, there’s no man that is kind. Life without men is by its actually easy, but the a man makes it harder. There’re many wars among the women just because of a man. Women fight amongst themselves over a man, and the man always plays with the love that a woman gives him.On the contrary, man always plays with love that a woman gives him. So I think the best way to protect
ourselves is to love ourselves instead of any other man.
Today I will talk about the type of man I feel like I could love. Actually, I don’t have a set any of traits to pursue. Of course, if he’s handsome and good-behaved well-behaved it is easier to make an impression. But the most important thing to me is that he has to be sincere and believable. Some years ago, when I studied at college, I felt like liked a classmate who came from the west of Vietnam. He was lovely, handsome, good-humored and I was especially attracted to his soft voice. he had a soft voice that attracted me a lot. Maybe it was just an appreciation because of how he was the only person who cared for me when I sat lonely at the bottom of class. But anyway, it was a good memory that l will never forget.
Till For now, love to me is a luxury, something and I don’t think about it any more. Family and friendship are more important and durable.0 votedOctober 5, 20140Who i am ?
I am mohamed abbas,i am 32 years old,i am a teacher,my contery is egypt,i want to improve my english skills.
Correction:
Who Am I?
I am Mohamed Abbas, I am 32 years old. I am a teacher. My country is Egypt. I want to improve my English skills.
Explanation:
All the important words in a title need to be capitalized.
If you meant to ask a question in your title you needed to change the word order, the way you wrote it was not the way a that question would be phrased.
People's names, the names of countries, and the names of languages are all capitalized in English.
Another way of saying it:
My name is Mohamed Abbas. I am a 32 year old teacher from Egypt. I would like to improve my English skills.
0 votedAugust 8, 20140- This is a common problem, even for native English speakers. As a previous answer pointed out, "good" is an adjective and "well" is an adverb. That means that you would use "good" to describe a noun. You would use "well" to describe an action. A notable example would be, "This dish tastes good." This is a common phrase in English, and it can lead to confusion because taste is usually an action verb, which would make it seem like this is incorrect. But, "taste" can also be used as a linking verb, which means that in this case taste could take the place of a state of being verb (is) in which case "good" is describing the noun "dish". A good rule to follow might be that if you can replace the verb with a state of being verb (is, are, was, etc.) you can use "good". If the verb is strictly an action, you would use "well". A common mix up that frequently is heard is when people are asked the question "How are you?" Many people answer, "I am good." Some people answer, "I am well." In the first answer they are saying that they are a good person, which they may not necessarily mean. In the second answer they are saying that they are in good health, which is usually exactly what they mean.0 votedAugust 7, 20143
- The short answer is "uneasy" and "uncomfortable" are synonyms. They are very similar in meaning and can be interchanged in this instance. Uncomfortable usually refers to a physical situation, where someone is not physically comfortable. Uneasy is more emotional and can involve some unseen, not physically felt sense of danger in addition to being uncomfortable. I hope that helps, my explanations can get a bit lengthy.0 votedAugust 7, 20141
question
"the researchers used a spectrometer to confirm that the spider in its web is spectrally indistinguishable from bird splat" in this sentence, what's the word "splat"mean?
Correct version:
Question
"The ressearchers used a spectrometer to confirm that the spider in its web is spectrally indistinguishable from bird splat." In this sentence, what does the word "splat" mean?
Explanation:
Titles are always capitalized in English.
"What" and "does" are not used as a contraction.
To answer your question:
In this case "splat" is referring to the smear of a bird dropping. "Splat" is usually a word that describes the sound of something wet and soft hitting something hard - like a bird dropping hitting the windshield of a car.
0 votedAugust 7, 20140- That is a figure of speech referring to a time when most people were farmers. Cows were used to being milked at a particular time every day and would come in from the pasture at the end of the day. "The guests stayed till the cows came home." is another way of saying that the guests stayed for too long - they stayed all day long. The word came is a past tense form of the word "come" - which matches it the other verb in that sentence, "stayed". It is talking about an action that happened in the past.0 votedAugust 7, 20142
My Favorite Drink
Matcha is my favorite drink recently. It is a fine powder green tea, which comes from Japan. Last November, I had my most memorable cup of matcha in Kyoto. The matcha restaurant is in an ancient building, which provides a lot of drinks and desserts, consisting of ice cream, jelly, colds and hot drinks. I ordered the most popular hot matcha there. After the professional waiter poured the beautiful green tea into my cup, I stirred it and had a mouthful taste. Meanwhile, I thought that I have never had such a wonderful matcha before. It really made me feel like I am in heaven. Matcha is really my cup of tea.
Rewritten for correction and clarity.
Recently matcha has become my favorite drink. It is a fine powered green tea from Japan. I had my most memorable cup of matcha last November in Kyoto. The matcha restaurant is in an ancient building and provides a lot of drinks and desserts such as ice cream, jelly, cold and hot drinks. I ordered their most popluar hot matcha. After the waiter poured the beautiful green tea into my cup I stirred it and took a mouthful to taste. I thought I had never had such wonderful matcha before. It really made me feel like I was in heaven. Matcha is really my cup of tea.
I moved the adverb "recently" from the back of the sentence to the front and changed the verb because in the original sentence recently did not modify anything - it was just sort of hanging there. Recently is an adverb, which means there needs to be a verb, adverb or adjective in the sentence that it is modifying (or describing). In saying "Recently matcha has become my favorite drink" the word recently is telling when matcha became the favorite. The word order can be changed around a bit (I personally like to put adverbs at the front of the sentence, but that is just personal preference). You could say it like this: Matcha has recently become my favorite drink.
Although technically the way the sentence "Last November, I had my most memorable cup of matcha in Kyoto" could work, it just seemed a bit awkward. If you still want to keep the phrase "Last November" in the front of the sentence I would suggest putting "in Kyoto" with it like this: "Last November in Kyoto, I had my most memorable cup of matcha." Or you could leave the prepositional phrase out altogether - "Last November, I had my most memorable cup of matcha." The reason for the change is because the prepositional pharse "in Kyoto" is modifying "Last November" and it is usually best to have the modifier as close to what it is modifying as possible. "Last November" is modifying the verb by telling us when the action took place and "in Kyoto" is telling us where it took place and it works better if those modifiers are kept together.
I changed the "there" to "their" and put it in its proper place. There, their and they're are confusing little words because they are so common, they sound alike, but they all mean something different and getting them mixed up is an easy mistake - even for native English speakers! Simply put, "there" is an adjective telling where something is in place. "Their" is a possessive pronoun telling that something belongs to them (such as the tea belonged to the restaurant). "They're" is a contraction of they and are. It seemed to me that you were meaning to say that you chose the most popular hot matcha tea that the restaurant had - "I ordered their most popular hot matcha." As opposed to you had the tea at that place - "I ordered the most popular hot matcha there."Because the verb tense for this paragraph was mostly in the past tense I changed the verb from "am" to "was" in the next to the last sentence.
All in all, I was quite impressed with the quality of English in this piece. You have mastered the language quite well and the mistakes that you made were of a more complex nature than a beginner usually makes. I especially liked and was delighted by how you used an English figure of speech at the end. Very good job!
0 votedJuly 29, 20142Will the Paper Media Disappear From our vision Sight Within the next Ten Years?
Paper media is a kind of one way to spread information or news through printed paper, including in the form of books, journals and newspapers.
After the first journal came into people’s vision view in 1588, paper media has had to deal with various inventions that threatened its existence. It has experienced the birth of wireless eclectic means of communication in 1895 and the television media in 1926. Every time when the a new media became was invented, an increasing number of people would shout,
“The paper magazine is going to end!” However, the journals (paper media) still continued to develop.
When the digital age (represented by computer, smartphone and ipad) coming came, the voices crying of “paper media will be discarded” is became increasingly strong because they are paper is inconvenient to retrieve, read, and carry as well as having a high cost.
On the other hand, people hold the opinion that the new devices will not take a the place of paper media forever since because we can feel peaceful and joyful when we read books and at the same time it has a worth to being collected for a hundreds years like antiques these items have potential value as antiques.
From my perspective, the paper media may not disappear from world completely, but definitely the paper market will shrink. It will probably develop into a small, specialized market one where only providing a VIP service only.and people have to pay.
This essay will display two different opinions and give my own opinion about the future of paper media with some supports.Titles in English have every important word capitalized. And titles should be as short and clear as possible.
I replaced vision with view because vision is a more personal noun whereas view has a broader meaning and can apply to all people without your having to use the word people.
Some phrases were added to help clarify the meaning of the essay, but some phrases were left as they were although I would suggest re-wording them. Such as: However, the journals (paper media) still develop. This could change to "Still, paper media continued to develop." Another phrase that could be changed is "we can feel peaceful and joyful when we read books". This might be easier understood if it were so say "some people experience a sense of joy and peace when reading a printed book"
The grammar mistakes are actually few in this essay and the vocabulary difficulties will get smaller as you practice and read more English. Good job.
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