Unexpected discovery :P camp near Baikal)
I went camping a week ago. It was near the biggest lake in the world - Baikal. Mmm) I was so excited,no comma needed here because I have never seen anything more beautiful than that in nature! There were white soft sent(don't understand this part--clouds?) and blue, crystal clear water, it was like being at the Bahamas ;) really)
I must confess:take out colon...that I have lived in Irkutsk a little way from (or you could say...close to)Baikal for 17 years (that's my age ;)) and i have always dreamt about trips abroad which takes a lot of money and energy to visit the most beautiful places in the world. And just a week ago, I realized that one of them was really closed (close?) to me :3
I can say in conclusion, keep your eyes open! 'Cause sometimes we don't notice amazing things that are right in front our eyes. (this is the expression you were looking for) I cleaned up the last person's work with what I that was correct.