Background

我叫Rachel.我的中国名字是瑞雪。我(是)二十四岁。我有先生和一个女儿。她(是)八个月了。她很可爱。我不工作因为我是妈妈。我带(呆)在家里。

去年我跟我的老公住中国。我们喜欢中国人了。我们可能回去。

I think "is"  is too many in this article.

Your Chinese name sounds beautiful. There is a saying in China,A heavy snow promises a good harvest.(瑞雪兆丰年) .

My English is not very well. But I am very happy to communicate with friends.