My city

Hi everyone! I'm Ivan. I'm Argentinian and I live in Rosario. I want to tell everyone about my city. Rosario is a large and very important city. My city is also known as "The Argentine Chicago". The weather is always nice. The winter is not very cold and sometimes it is cloudy and rainy. The summer is very hot and is usually very sunny. Rosario also has two very important shopping centers, where the stores open early in the morning and stay open for the whole day. Rosario also has a good pedestrian street, which is especially good for walking together in the winter under the rain, window shopping. My city also has some beaches, and in summer many people come to swim. Here, there is very important gastronomic activity. There are many restaurants, bars, pubs... The nightlife is great here!. Rosario is a great place to visit!!.. Regards

Practicing the future

Question: Will you make dinner? 
Affirmation: Yes, she will make dinner.
Negation: No, she won't make dinner.

My favorite pastime

I like soccer a lot, so my favorite pastime is watching soccer games on TV.

My favorite soccer player is Cristiano Ronaldo.
He is one of the most celebrated soccer players in the entire world.
He scores at an astounding rate each year and he has broken many records. He gives donations to the poor, the disabled and a number of children. I think he is generous and nice to people.

He is a top-notch soccer player as stated above, and I think no one can equal him except for Lionel Messi. The two players are polar opposites in terms of their playing style, lifestyle and personality.
It is very hard to decide which one is the best player in the world.

I love to travel.

I have a job in Seoul and I'm a web designer.
That means that it is difficult for me to travel the world since my job is so busy and I often work until midnight, but sometimes I've tried to travel the world.
I've been to about 17 countries, but that's not enough for me.
I have always had a dream of taking a trip around the world with my soulmate.
I love to travel the world.
Travel is really important to people's lives.
We can feel stranger and see strange places though travel. (This sounds a little awkward. "Strange" has a negative connotation. You might want to say "we can better understand the world around us")
We can feel realized from people. (I don't understand what you're trying to say here)
Finally we can be a broad-minded person and have broad outlooks on life.
I love to travel the world.

What about visiting Korea someday?
You already have a friend in Korea.
Could you be a friend when i go on a trip round the world? (Note: A lot of this is written techniclly correct, but the style doesn't sound natural. It is written more like a poem than a paragraph. A lot of the lines are broken up and it doesn't flow easily.)

THE MODERN MOVIE THEATER IS AT HOME

Many years ago, few people went to the movies. Because of this, many movie theaters have been closed. I think this is because of two reasons.

Firstly, many people watch movies on the Internet. This is easier and more comfortable but it has disadvantages as well. It's usually illegal and the movies are low quality. You can't watch movies on a big screen like you can in a movie theater.

The second reason is the price increase (this has been more upsetting to me). When I was 10, going to watch a movie cost about 5 euros. Nowadays, it can cost 8, 9, 10 euros or more. It's incredible that in only 10 years, the price has increased so much.

I think that if the price decreases, many people will go to the cinema. When there was an offer in Madrid, (watching a movie cost 3 euros, I think) almost all the cinemas were full.

There is nothing like watching a movie that you love with your friends or family in a big movie theater. (Note: The word cinema is very formal. In everyday language everyone says movie theater. Cinema is more commonly used in the name of a movie theater. For example, "My favorite movie theater is New York Cinemas")