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Describing a house
There is no balcony and chimney. It is a two-storey house. The kitchen, the living room and the loundry room are in on the ground floor. It is a traditional house but it doesn't have an attic room and or a basement.The roof is in bad condition.It probably has leaking problems because the roof seems to have holes.
laundry
you do not need to have the word "room" after attic
(I would try to combine these two sentences and say-"The roof seems to have holes in it which may result in it leaking."
0 votedOctober 2, 20140- La mia famiglia e casa Ciao! Mi chiamo Jess e sono di Illinois. Come stai? Sto bene. Ho una piccola famiglia. Mia madre è un ifermiere. Mio fratello guida un camion. Ho una segretaria. Ho cinque cugini, due nonni, e tanti amici. Io sono a casa in soggiorno. La mia casa ha tre camere da letto e due bagni. La mia stanza e verde con un letto matrimoniale nuovo, un armadio, e un televisione. Mia madre stanza è blu con un letto, un armadio, e un tappeto. La nostra cucina è grande. Mio fratello invece ha un casa con uno camera da letto e uno bagno. La sua casa è marrone. In soggiorno lui ha due divini marroni e un tappeto verde. Anche, lui ha tre automobile. Lui ha un vecchio camion rosso e un nuovo camion nero. Lui ha un automobile blu.October 1, 201450
- Intro to Family and Home Ciao! Mi chiamo Jess e sono di Illinois. Vivo con mia madre. Io ho un figlio, Josh. La mia casa ha tre camere, due bagni, un soggiorno, e una cucina. La mia madre camera da letto è blu. Anche, lei ha una automobile bianca. In la mia camera da letto è un letto, una televisione e un sedia. In nostra casa, la cucina è grande. La mia nonna è simpatico molta. Il suo appartamento è piccola e bianca con due camera, un bagno, una cucina, e un soggiorno.August 29, 201490
Get Got a sunburn
Yesterday I went climbing, and I got a sunburn around my neck and my two arms. Thanks god that I wore a long trousers which because that saved my legs. Yesterday morning I searched the weather, it's it was cloudy. But but at noon, the big sun hung up,came out. with no preparation when I got home, I found my arms and neck are red and hurt. I must take remedies. I sliced a cucumber and put it on my burn skin for one hour. It worked, but it was still red. I thought that several days later, my skin will be brown. In a few days my sunburn will go away and my skin will turn brown.
Since I wasn't prepared for a sunny day, I discovered when I got home that my neck and arms were sunburnt.
As a remedy I sliced a cucumber and placed it on my neck and arms for an hour.
0 votedJuly 7, 20140Letter To a Friend
Dear Max,
I was upset to hear that what happened with to your house after a the hurricane. I can understand that It it is really a real tragedy for your family.
Ten years ago my family had a similar experience,. but maybe even worse consequences were there.I was at work when a colleague of mine told me something bad is was happening in your my town. Then I suddenly realised that my family can could be in trouble, and after 5 minutes I raced toward to home. Fortunately, my family didn't got get injured,. but I couldn't believe that I see my house. It was awfully broken by surrounding trees.
I hope everithing (everything) will be ok and an the insurance company will cover the cost of repairs. I'd be happy to provide any help, if you need to it.
Your friend,
SergeiI couldn't believe what I saw. My house was destroyed by fallen trees.
0 votedJuly 2, 20141This is a letter where I am complain for a complaining about bad service
Dear Sirs COSTA HOTEL or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my displeasure at the poor service I received yesterday, on July 1, 2014 in at the COSTA HOTEL., according to ABC-12345 reservation number. For me, this would be one night of comfort in a five star hotel, listed as one of the best hotels in the city. However, this was one of the worst experiences I've had in hotels in this category.
When I entered to my room I realized that the air conditioning does did not work and the room was dirty. I spoke with the staff to ask to be moved from room to a different room and they told me they had no rooms available and that the maintenance staff would solve my the problem. Finally, they were able to repair the air conditioner at 1 am and to clean my room. They did not caring care that I had an international flight the next day and I needed to be at the airport at 4 am. and I couldn't sleep or rest as was my goal.
I would like a full refund of the cost of the room as soon as possible, otherwise, I'll talk to my lawyers and I'll complain about you publicly. I look forward to your prompt reply or my lawyer's will be called.
Please, help me to learn English :)For the sentences highlighted in Red and Pink, I have written replacement sentences below. I hope this is helpful.
The hotel was listed as one of the best hotels in the city, however, this was one of the worst experiences I've had at a 5 star hotel.
As a result I couldn't sleep or rest before my flight.
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