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Hi, I'm from Shanghai,China, so I speak Mandarin and dialect of Shanghai. I am looking for friends who can help me to improve English. Be free to talk to me if you wanna practice Mandarin. :)
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    西安 (Practice with shi...de and 到）

    我很喜欢西安。我是三年前去西安的。我在西安看到很多中国传统的建筑。大雁塔(Dàyàn Tǎ) 很漂亮。我看到兵马俑。我是坐公交车去的。兵马俑很远的。我坐车去看了兵马俑，离城市非常远。（The word 远 needs to be used comparing with somewhere)我在KTV唱歌唱了卡拉ok。我唱歌唱得不好但是我最喜欢它。我还在ktv唱了歌，虽然我唱得不好但是我还是很享受唱歌的过程。（在ktv唱歌 is equal to 唱了卡拉ok， it is kind of repetitive.) 我在西安的时候是虎年所以你能买 毛绒玩具 （máoróngwánjù)的虎。当然，我买到了一个！另外，那一年是虎年，我还在西安买到了老虎娃娃的绒毛玩具。


    It is the first time for me to correct Mandarin essay, so I don't know whether this could help you or not. Your Chinese is great, all the grammars are correct. I just tried to make it more natural in Mandarin.If you have any question, Please let me know.

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    June 19, 2014
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    learning English The reason why I am practicing English is that I need to get band 7 score in IELTS exam ( which stands for international English language test system ). Only after I achieve 7 in that, then I can apply for the permanent visa in Australia. I have been learning English for more than 10 years, however my speaking and writing skills are not strong enough to get 7, which made me really frustrating. I knew this site from one of my friends, so I hope you guys could help me. My friends regard me as a good teacher and I speak native Mandarin and dialect of Shanghai. Be free to talk to me if you want to practice Mandarin.
    June 19, 2014
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