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  • Corrected

    "It's a place she spends most of her free time in"

    Is this sentence grammatically correct?

     

    As stated in one of the other corrections, we do not end sentences in prepositions in English (at least, we shouldn't!).

    You could remove the "in": "It's a place she spends most of her free time.",

    phrase it with a "where": "It's a place where she spends most of her free time.",

    or give the "in" an object: "It's a place in which she spends most of her free time."

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    Computer skills should be taught in schools today.

    Next week, I have to do an English exam, and one of its parts is a writing task. In order to practise, here goes an essay!

    It is a fact that the quality of the education varies a lot depending on the country. Additionally, it is well-known that sometimes schools do not focus on teaching certain skills which are tremendously important nowadays, such as computer skills.

    From my point of view, this kind of knowledges are knowledge is very useful for the pupil's development. It is not just a question about learning something of which you are going to take advantage only in your free-time but a dexterity that almost everybody will need in their job. Nowadays, we live in an era dominated by computers and machines, and we rely on them so as to complete our work faster and keep ourselves in touch with working contacts.

    On the other hand, in my understanding, using computers might be favorable (beneficial or adventageous would fit better than favorable) to the children's development. The use of computers helps you to make a decision quickly and to train your brain as long as it is used appropriately. Furthermore, having some computer classes per week could be a break in the school time to relax a bit and be ready for the next subjects. This is really important because sometimes pupils do not behave correctly in the classroom owing due to a lack of concentration, which may be sorted out by it computer usage.

    Due to Because of the above, I defend the need to have some computer classes per week in all schools, because it. Technology has more advantages than disadvantages.

     

    <em>Good job! Interesting take on the issue. Have a nice day! :)</em>

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  • Corrected

    How many remarkable places are there around us that we don't notice?

    Yesterday, I rode a bicycle around my district and I saw a nice court yard. It's Its name is Petrovsky's Yard. There is a nice carriage, an anchor and a small bridge with white swans. There is a monument by Peter the First. Behind the monument there are a lot of flower beds. It's magnificent! Another yard is nearby. It's name is Sochi 2014 :) There are a lot of sport sculptures. An aluminum crab is in the center of the playground. It is keepping (holding) a white sea shell whith an orange fire. In the ending my trip At the end of my trip, I observed a tremendous sunset! There are a lot of paints on the sky: a pink, a yellow, an orange, a blue and more. I thought, "I am happy because I can see this wonderful things!"


    This sounds like a beautiful place!

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  • Corrected

    Whitsun

    Tomorrow is Whitsun.
    That is a Christianity (Christian) holiday.

    At <em>(on)</em> this day the delegation of the spirit will (be) celebrated.
    In the bible (it) is written that at <em>(on)</em> this days the different languages are <em>(were) </em>born.

    I wrote about this because I think that topic suits to italki :).

    <em>Interesting! :) In America, most people I know call the holiday </em>"<em>Pentecost". I had never heard of Whitsun before, and apparently it is often used in the UK. Very interesting indeed. </em>

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    Sommer! Meine Sommer-Ferien hat am Freitag angefangen! Ich bin sehr glücklich. Aber, ich habe ein Problem. Ich habe für zwei Jahre Deutsch gelernt, und jetyt ich gehe in die Schule nicht! Ich möchte mehr Deutsch lernen. Das ist warum ich schreibe hier! Ich spreche ein bisschen Deutsch und möchte nicht sie vergessen. Ich will ein Gespräch haben, und ich hoffe ich kann bald. Ich suche für jemand zu helfe mir. Ich spreche und schreibe "Lehrbuch" Deutsch, und das nicht so gut, einer. Ich möchte perfekt einmal Deutsch sprechen! Ich bin falsch für etwas (oder meisten!) Sätze. Korrigieren Sie mich, bitte! Ich habe dicke Haut. Wiedersehen, meine Freunden!
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