help me for this writing Community, aggregate of the person are living together in the limite place, is in large notion not just for living, but also to create the activities, among this activities is protect his area. According to this concept, I oppose to build a military base near to my community, for ceratin reasons, I will describe them in below. Similary, when we say military automatically our mind tend to war, in this case, war links to dangerous certainly if this base military near to habits. In other Word, if my country launches war with other country, the airflight causes a considerable dangerous to persons live arround the base military, and damage lot of the threats. In addition, other impact influence on commity is the noisy, espacially causes the problems on the babies. For other hand, the mostly base contains the aeroports and the weight vehicules. For instance, the last evidence says that individuals live closely to a base do not stand more than two years, Morever, bases military is known by containning the high technology, such as radar. In the last, community can contami by other vector factor is products chimecals. The base military is considerate a Company to engine the innovation of any yields such as nuclear energy or develep the chimecals missiles. For example, in Chine has a big explosure in his base military effects an awful damage on the deaths and injures, neverthless, this damage causes the dangerous dusty on environment. In sump up, all the factors that I mention in above, should considerat by government after to build any Project can effect the commity.

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A visitor has only one day to spend in your country Where should this visitor go on that day? Why? Tourisme or traveling are considering a medical for humanity, espacially nowadays, the lives are be complicated and stressful, so that the best solution is travel to a country, certainly this country is Morocco that contain a beautiful city’s Marakech. According to this reason, I advise any person want visit morocco to visite Marakech, for some reasons, I will describe it in below. First of all, Marakech is a culture city, it contains half the monuments that know in Morocco, and marakech is considering between the old cities in morocco. For instance, origin the name’s morocco is Marakech. It is located in the middle east of morocco in the past, Marakech or red city, have a good position economic and cultural. Moreover, Marakech establish a big festival in Africa. Those give it a rich and diversity cultural. In addition, Marakech knows by a diversity of food, such as Tajine or Bastila. On the hand, the latest statistic displays in the famous Magazine of the food that Marakech classified between the top ten cities in diversity of the meals. On the other hand, the mostly meals are naturel and it is better for health. The last not the least, Infrastructure in Marakech developed so rapid in the last decade, today Marakech have an airport international and have also a huge gate ways link among all cities in the Kingdom. Furthermore, the mostly hotels in Marakech classified in five stars hotels like Mamounia hotel, which receive the famous actors and the politic man. In sump up, red city is related by its diversity culture and its delicious foods for that the tourists visit it several times, also its location is near to Europe can person spend two hours on flying between Paris and Marakech. In my opinion, the tourists can know themselves in this city.

essay writing Nowadays, one of the most problem meet the student, it is the orientation to the fields of studying that student can follow after high school. There are students prefer the literaturs classes that includ history and art, whereas the other likes the Sciences classes. In my opinion, however, I prefer the student foucus on the Sciences classes. In this essay, i will elaborate some reasons. First and formost, In the last statistic argue that students follow the Science major have possibilite to find an employement extremely easy than the student follow the literaturs major, in order to many factors, the majority companies based on the technologies and they are skelton on any economy of nation. In second place, the most kinds of sciences contain the lessons about art or history, for that the Science classes include all thing. For instance, when I was student, my profesor tough the science of art, related by mathematics the developing the civilisations and decreasing the civilisation or related by biologie developing and behaviours the old person. This, effect to knoweledge in student and he have a globization for all fields. The least but not last, the sciences put the student to research for the discover and developed himeself. In addition, the study helps the mind is not mood, but gives the mind to analyse the things. In sump up, creature the climat to study is the essential keys for improve the careere on the student, even if those classes literaturs or sciences classes. Other hand, the successful can make by career literatur just this person should be to see the things by other angle.

Integrat writing The lecture and the reading are both discuss about the congestion pricing. While the reading offers the advanges of this policy, the lecture refutes this idea, point by point, saying this policy is not better solution for city. First of all, through the reading claims to encourage the people to use more the public transportation like the buses and train. However, the lecture argues that the public transportation is not extensive in all city for that the reading don’t encourage to use public transportation. In addition, the reading makes the argument that by using this policy can commute the times to home so drivers decide to pay in peak time. In contrast, the lecture refutes this point by it is not solution for commute and the people will be spend the time so the public transportation will be crowed. Lastly, the reading passage argues the public transportation is solution for benefit cleaner air, but the lecture dismisses this solution because the transportation is expensive and more across the streets so make the pollution.

tast 1; integrat writing correct my mistakes please The lecture and the reading are both discussing about space exploration. While the reading states that we must the benefit science for space exploration, the lecture refutes this idea, saying that we must the benefit the science for developing the live because there are many children live in poor situation in USA. First of all, though the reading claims that all the new technology was developed by space exploration. For example dishes and computer, conversely the lecture argues that we must focus to find solution problem in our mother earth such as solution of the education. In addition, the reading argues that we will invest to travel to space by shuttle because it is future tourism. However, the lecture makes other argument that the travel to space is very expensive and space will be for super rich people. Lastly, the reading passage argues that the space explore can by it to find the life in other planet but the lecture dismisses this claim are alone in cosmic this idea will affect in the children because they will be hungry also the education are decrease for that the lecture say we must benefit the science for develop our planet.

toefl test : integrat writing tast 1 can please correct my mistakes. The lecture and the reading are both discussing organic food, while the reading states that the arguments about organic food and its disadvanges. However the lecture refutes this, saying that there are increasing to produce the organic food. First of all, though the reading claims that the price of organic food is more expensive than the no organic food for that the reading gives example in grocery can find the strawebeis organic double in no organic, but the lecture argues that the no organic content 50 chimecal pestisate to drop this food In addition, the reading makes the argument that it is difficult to find the organic food in story, the lecture counters this point by stating it is not true this information because in big story can find the section organic and the person can buy the organic milk Lastly, the reading passage argues that there is not difference in taste between organic or no organic food. However the reading dismisses this claim by clarify the no organic milk content the genetic called RBGH this element can cause the concer for that the lecture advice the people to investment in their health.