Answer to Bill
Hello, Bill,
It isn't hard for me to check your chapter, because I like this city. Unfortunately, I havn't found in the text anything about few very interesting places. Readers would be interested after getting information about Museum of the Sun, Central Park, Zoo and Royal Park. I suggest you to add this places to yout book.
Also usually it is difficult to find places for parking, particularly in the city centre. I know good solution - people can leave their cars at the Royal Park - there is so many parking spots there. May be it looks expensive for someone, I can suggest them using free parking places along central streets. And of course you should put work schedule of significant places, nobody wants to spend his time for waiting near museum.
If you put portion of information about nightclubs and bars your book will have exhaustive answers for frequently asked questions. For example, you can suggest Bunker club for younger tourists and more esteemed Rock-City for others. Perhaps anythyng about sport bars also can be interesting.
Good luck, my friend! I am looking for opportunity of buying your book!
Yours,
Vsevolod