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The first week in Beijing
I have been back in Beijing, China for almost one week, but I can't get used to (it) here. The traffic here is terrible, all these people and cars that never follow the rules. The cars is are beeping (honking) all the time and the people always swear back. With the background of such a large population, the resources become valuable and specious precious, everyone has to compete to acquaire acquire them. The situation and the fact make me sad somehow.
Hi! You're on your way to being really proficient in English. I've made a few corrections to your notebook entry which I think sounds a bit more natural. Your last sentence is a bit tricky, but I would just use either 'situation' or 'fact' (but not both) <em>in this particular case.</em> So it would just be 'This situation/fact makes me sad'. You can also drop the somehow in that sentence.
Well done though, it was a really good paragraph.
0 votedMay 15, 20141About old and young people§
The history of relationships between old and young people told tells us that the number of years that you have (Note: While technically correct, this is usually phrased as "how old you are") has nothing to do with the problems you face with your parents and have has everything to do with the way you see parents and interacte interact with them.
if you observe that they are soo so bossy you must know that's that it's not because they want to make you an abeiant (obedient?) animal but because they feel that the whole world is out of their controll control and also don't want you to be also out of their circle of influence and authority.
it's just like the earth when it uses gravity to keep us near it's its surface .
the first cause of these problems was lack of understanding, another reason is your freinds friends who can effect affect the way you see your parents in a deep way till you need them to be safe emotionally.
in all circumstances, the dialogue is the principal key to understand your parents and to build a good relationship with themIt's a really good attempt, I've just made a few corrections. Remember to capitalise letters when starting a sentence. Also be careful with your spelling, you can use a dictionary to help you with words you aren't confident about. Good work!
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