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Hi everyone, this is Haifeng from Beijing, China. I want to further improve my English and make more friends, that is the reason why I came here. Besides, I just started to learn some basic Spanish.
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    Today

    八月一号:
    今天,十二小时我醒来。我去剧院。 我看好的戏剧。我吃晚餐同我的家庭。
    Bā yuè yī hào:
    Jīntiān, shí'èr xiǎoshí wǒ xǐng lái. Wǒ qù jùyuàn. Wǒ kànhǎo de xìjù. Wǒ chī wǎncān tóng wǒ de jiātíng.

     

    Shona:

     

    I have several questions:

    1 What do you mean by "十二小时"?

    2 we often use "起床" which means to get up instead of "醒来"。

    3 we often put some specific adjective istead of "好的/不好的"

    4 “戏剧” itself is too general, i suggest that you use "歌剧"“戏剧”or something else.

    5 "家庭" and "家人" are different, "家庭" is a unit of our society, while "家人" means the family memebers.

    6 “同” structure. we use 同+somebody+do someting structure.

    Based on what you want to say, I try to offer you a version:

    我今天中午十二点起床,然后去剧院看了精彩的歌剧。我打算晚上同我的家人吃晚餐。

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    August 1, 2014
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  • Commented

    电视剧的话可以考虑《奋斗》《北京爱情故事》,电影的话可以看《有话好好说》

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    May 13, 2014
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