IELTS Academic task 2 *I would appreciate if someone can check my essay :) Topic : Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion. It is debatable whether sports professionals earn huge salaries than other essential professions. Some people are convinced that sportsmen earn a great deal more money than other professionals is unfair while others think it is fair. I would discuss both sides in the following and provide my personal opinion afterwards. It may be true that sports stars' earnings are much higher than other occupations such as doctors or scientists who are dispensable for our lives. Despite their huge contributions to society, they get less paid regardless of their outstanding results. On top of that, sports stars may bring down the image of their countries by making trouble. In spite of that, they still earn high salaries from the competition. On the other hand, it can be justified to reward with huge compensations to paid professional sports stars. As they have unimaginable pressure from media, putting lots of effort and time behind the match. They also have to take risks from injuries, which may affect their lifelong. Plus, there is a mental health issue. For instance, one of the remarkable tennis player, Naomi Osaka did not participate the Wimbledon match recently as she is suffering from mental health. It indicates that sports professionals are required to manage not only physical abilities but also mental health. With all these considerations, it is my belief that it is fair to earn much more money to sports professionals compared to other occupations. The important thing is that other jobs should be all equally paid considering their contributions in other ways.

IELTS Academic Task1 The graph and chart reveal the information about water use in the world and water consumption in two different countries. The most striking feature is that water use in agriculture climbed dramatically in one century. It was only 500Km in 1900 and increased up to 3,000Km in 2000. Whereas, water used in the industrial and domestic sectors slowly increased since 1950. The second thing to point out is that industrial and domestic both ascended in mid-century. Overall, the outright majority of water use is in the agriculture sector which reaches to 3,000Km. The usage of water in agriculture and domestic sectors came along. #IELTS #Writing Moving on to the table below, it shows the water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000. It can be seen that the water consumption per person in Brazil is much higher than Democratic Republic of Congo (359m, 8m, respectively). In addition, the water usage in irrigated land in Brazil is 26,500Km which indicates that it is mostly used in the agriculture sector.

IELTS Academic Task 1 *I would be appreciated if someone checks the grammatical errors or any comments. The diagram illustrates how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Overall, there are five steps to produce electricity via geothermal energy. The cold water goes down into hot rocks called Geothermal zone, afterwards, it goes into electric gird through some steps. The first step of this process is that cold water travels down 4.5km into the injection well and then go through the Geothermal zone which is not rocks. After passing through that, it reaches the production well. Finally, the hot water pumped up to the condenser. The rest of the steps process on the ground. At first, the water transforms into steam by the condenser. The next process is the turbine spin by the steam and it transfers into the electric grid by the generator which powered by the turbine and produces electricity consequently. #italki14thAnniversary #IELTS #Writing

[IELTS Writing 1] In modern times, people are under more stress than ever. This has a negative impact on their well-being. State some of the causes and suggest possible solutions. ->We have been through rapid development since the industrial revolution. It is true that many people are more under pressure in modern society. While this is a serious problem, It can be solved by examining our values. The main cause of this issue is that a lot of people are under intense pressure to succeed in a highly competitive society. Stress and pressure lead to various illnesses physically and mentally. For instance, 70% of Korean workers are under intense emotional strain. However, there are solutions to this problem. One of the ways to alleviate stress is that people can make an effort to change their values. For example, people may think their success brings happiness. They always struggle to achieve more. But we will face that there are always better people or situations than ourselves. We might never feel successful or satisfied even if we already accomplish a lot of our goals. In fact, a recent study has shown that some people who were used to be better off, were less happy. To sum up, It is clear that stress affects negatively on our lives. Nevertheless, the issue can be resolved to look into our worth. I am having IELTS exams in 2 months to go into University. I would be appreciated who can help with my writing! :) - Uses a variety of complex structures - Produces frequent error-free sentences - Has good control of grammar

Does anyone know any University students in their 30s (Bachelor) in the UK? I am 32 and I am concerned that I might be the oldest one and not get into with classmates. I have a bachelor's degree but I want to study a different major. I think I am not ready for a Master's degree in a new field. Can someone give me some advice..?

[Urgent] Please help me to proofread this! If there's better sentences, please let me know. I studied my course at *** University with full-time work. It was intense to study and work both. However, they broaden my horizons with economics, international history and western cultures courses. In particular, I was interested in economics subjects. Because economics relates to our daily lives. . . I am eager to take this course because I assume this is the last chance to study at school for my career.