There's very few mistakes, but I've changed a few words to make it sound slightly more formal

Dear Ena Meyers.

First of all, I wish to thank you for your welcome e-mail and all the help you have provided us, I really appreciate it.


I am writing to you to inform you about some important things:


Firstly, I have booked a flight for the next July 10th, and arriving in Dallas on that day. I would love to meet you in person if there is any available time in your schelude.


Secondly, prospective Spanish teachers are having some trouble in regards to finding rental housing. The problem might comes from some error in the formal documents which our Spanish advisers have made for us. I suppose they have made a mistake, in spite of the fact they are working really well.

Finally, could you please write an official offer letter for us? (i.e. for the spanish teachers that are going to work in the Edward teacher school)


Thank you so much for your time and help.

Best regards and looking forward to meeting you.

Jorge Beato-Buch

my first lesson

<em>my name is klaus,and i want start today with italki.</em>

My name is Klaus, and today I am starting to use italki

<em>my friend robert gerding use it also,and he advise me italki.</em>
My friend Robert also uses it, and he recommended it to me. (<em>or</em> he advised me to use it)

<em>my son jules,he is 13,must learn english,because his teacher is not really happy about him :-( </em>

My son Jules is 13. He must learn english as his teacher is not really happy with him

<em>so we start today with ITALKI.
</em>So today we're starting with italki! 



Best of luck to both of you! 

Tomorrow

<em>I will watch a concert tomorrow evening.</em>

I will go to a concert tomorrow evening. <<this is correct
<em>but</em> you are more likely to say: I'm going to a concert tomorrow. As it is an event in the very near future.

<em>I really love classical music. The two violinists are both from Austria.</em>

<em>I am not sure the team is famous or not, but the price of my ticket is not very expensive. </em>

I'm not sure if the duet/musicians/orchestra are famous or not, but my ticket was not very expensive.

<em>I am looking forward to watching this show as I bought this concert ticket 2 months ago.</em>

I am looking forward to going to this show as I bought the concert ticket 2 months ago.

<em>I hope it won't be disappointed.</em>

I hope I won't be disappointed/ I hope it won't be disappointing

<em>Enjoy the day and wish I could learn more the soul of classical music. Good luck!</em>

I hope to enjoy the day and I wish I could learn more about the soul of classical music. Good luck!



I hope you enjoy your concert! 

A couple of notes: we usually attend, go to or go see a concert rather than watch it. You would only really <em>watch</em> a concert if the concert was on TV.
Also, we don't use "team" to talk about a group of musicians. 

I hope some of this will be of help, and that you keep up the good work! 

Journey of south moutains

May 19th, 5 o’clock on Tuesday morning.

I was on my way to the South Mountains.

After one hour of cycling - taking photos on the way - I reached my destination.

This place hasn’t changed a bit over the last five years.


The air that morning was fresh and clear, it smelled like green trees and wild flowers.
And there was a neat path through the mountains and over their tops. After many kilometers, I was deep in the mountains, and I was surrounded by dark green scenery.

At last I reached the top of the mountain. I could see the sky and the landscape all around me.
The sky was clear and blue ,and it seemed so close that I felt I could almost touch it if I raised my hands.

The early morning air in the distance looked like thick smoke. And there was a village in sight!

What a fantastic view!


For several minutes I looked at the blue sky. And I can’t help thinking:

Compared to nature, we humans are really humble.

In the modern world
We often struggle to earn more money to own a bigger house and get a better job.

Do we do these things for the comfort and happiness of mankind?
No, I don’t think so.

Truly , if we spend time and work hard we might get all these things at last.
But at that time, will we feel better?
No. Unfortunately, We will want to own more !
In the end we’ll feel upset!
Man’s desire is endless!

Nature has never changed!
Happiness is not in the future , but always surrounds us!

<em>mosquito coil</em>

<em>We use mosquito coil during summer in Japan.</em>

We use mosquito coils during the summer in Japan.

<em>Nowaday, it works to have chemical warm by electricity instead of fire. </em>

Nowadays, it works by warming the chemicals with electricity instead of with fire.

<em>There can be a same item in other countries.</em>

The same item can be found in other countries.

<em>The form of traditional mosquito coil is characteristic and looks funny. </em>

This form of traditional mosquito coil is very characteristic and looks funny/unusual.

日本では夏の間、蚊取り線香を使います。今は火を使わずに、電気で薬液を温めて使います。他の国でも同じものがあることでしょう。昔ながらの蚊取り線香は、形に特徴があり、楽しいです。

<em>SEEKNESS</em>

Sickness

<em>When we are seriously seek, we find out the worth of our life. </em>

When we are seriously sick/ill, we find out the worth of our lives.

<em>We treat better to the folk, we enjoy tiny things of the life, we forgive easily. </em>

We treat people/folks better, we enjoy tiny things in our lives, we forgive more easily.

<em>When we are seek, we live better than we are healthy.</em>
When we are sick, we live better than when we are healthy.

<em>Seekness build wise men. Alberto</em>

Sickness builds wise men.


Hope this helps, Alberto!