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What is loneliness?
How did I spend last Sunday? I was alone. No cinema, no cafe, no shopping, no friends, no kids, no husband. All by myself. Was I bored? Did I feel lonely? No. It was my own day, nobody else's. I felt happy and calm. Really, sometimes it is nesessary to stay alone, to do nothing, to care about nobody. Just you (possibly add a comma here) yourself. Do you sometimes feel the same? Do you need to stay alone? Not because you feel sad and do not want anybody to disturb you, but just because you are happy being alone? What is loneliness? Loneliness is a strange thing. You can feel lonely in the crowd, you can feel lonely with people who are supposed to be your friends, but you can just also be all alone and do not feel lonely at all.
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Your English is very good! :) I agree with your observations no loneliness as well.
0 votedMarch 31, 20152Writint[1] about a movie
Hi everybody,Today I was watching a movie and saw some scen[2]s that made me remember things.
The things where a choice can be mark[3] a time of your life for bad or good[4], for example:
The boyfriend had to save to his girl but he didn't do , another gay[5] save her .... the problem was that the second gay[6] claim the boyfriend because he didn'[7] do anything.
Thanks for your corrections.
Regards.
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Juan, your English is understandable, but here are a few corrections you may want to consider so that you can sound more like a native speaker.
[1] This may have just been a typo but the word you're trying to use is spelled "Writing" not "Writint"
[2] You used the write word here, you just forgot an "e". The word you are trying to use is spelled "scenes", rather than "scens
[3] "be mark" is understandable, but it just does not sound natural to a native English speaker. Consider removing "be" and instead just saying "a choice can mark a time of your life"
[4] "Bad or good" is certainly understandable, but "better or worse" would sound more proper in this circumstance.
[5] The word "gay" refers to a homosexual man. I think you meant to use the word "guy" here.
[6] Same as number 5.
[7] You used the word "didn't" correctly, you just made a small spelling mistake by forgetting the "t".Overall, good job though! A native English speaker could certainly understand almost everything you were trying to say. I hope I was able to help you and I encourage you to keep practicing your English :)
0 votedMarch 29, 20151This is me
Hi people, my name is Jheniffer, I'm from Brazil, I have[1] 24 years old. If you can me help in the[2] my studies with English, talk [3] me please.
Feel free to correct my sentence.
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Jhennifer your English is at a good level. You just have a few small mistakes.
[1] In English we usually say "I am 24 years old" rather than "I have 24 years old"
[2] There is no need for "the" in this sentence.
[3] Your sentence is understandable here, but it would sound more like a native if you added the word "to". "Talk to me please" sounds a little more natural than "talk me please".
Overall, however, your English is good and it's very understandable :-)
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