Nimen hao

Wo xue zhong wen lai. Zen yang cai neng shi wo xue hao han yu? Xiexie!

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你们好，我正在学习中文，怎样才能使我学好汉语？谢谢！

Ni men hao,wo zheng zai xue xi zhong wen,zen yang cai neng shi wo xue hao han yu?Xie xie!

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Hello,I am a teacher of Chinese as a foreign language.If you want to learn Chinese well,the interest of Chinese culture is important.Of course,if you can try your best to speak Chinese instead of English,your Chinese level will be improved obviously.Don't be worried about the mistakes,we are just learner.

If you need help,contact with me.I will give you help for free,because I am a intern,and I need the experience of teaching.