my teacher

I'm going to have an entrance examination the day after tomorrow, so I'll stay near the college for 2 days.
This test includes an English interviewing, so I asked an ALT to help me 4 months ago.

(This sentance is correct, but I'd probably say '... so four months ago I asked an ALT to help me.')

I've practiced so hard.
Today,We (we) had our last lesson. In fact, I don't didn't want them to end because the lessons were so interesting!!
And she expects me to succeed. I have to meet her expectations!!
I hope that I can tell her a good news.

Please correct my essay!! About Japanese society

I think there's a tendency in Japan where we're expected to keep working for a certain company from the begining of our career to the until retirement.
However, I don't think that's a very good idea because I think it makes it tougher for you to find a wide variety of jobs that fit you.

In Japan, it is almost impossible to get better jobs once you quit the your previous job.
For the unfortunate economical trait, even though you ever get in trouble with your boss, or you can't find somebody who is compatible with, if you lead a healthy life, there's no other way but continue the work.
You would have to narrow down your options on your own for these reasons.
I think it's very ridiculous of you.

In many foreign countries except Japan, it is normal to switch jobs frequently and to like fly travel across the country to have interviews and so on.
They usually have many accomodations and flexibilities in the job hunting, and I think we should put those things into our society.

I'd be happy if I can get some feedback on my essey.
If there're some sentences and words that should be changed you noticed, please let me know!

Words

Today I saw a meaningful sentence translated to English, is about "If you want to build confidence, do the things you once thought you couldn't achieve; If if you want to beat anxiety, handle the trouble which make you anxious." From where I stand, this sentence is reasonable. The trouble in our imagination is usually much more difficult than it the action actually is.

Physics

I like physics. With help of physics, people know what is the lightning, thunder, light, and rain are. Why rivers freeze in winter, why ripe fruit fall from the trees. Even the flight of a bird is a description of the physical process. Physics is a life, is a nature. So I entered the Faculty of Physics at EKSU.

Please correct my essay! Human rights

In Japan, it's strongly traditional that men are expected to go to work and women are expected to stay home and raise kids.
The traditional men and women male and felmale roles exist in Japan in many ways, and that it is probably stronger than it is in other countries.
To be honest, the thought of it really makes me sad because it is quite outdated in today's world, and I think we don't have the rights to take every single person's fate into our hands.

In addition, there's still discrimination, racism and many problems pertaining to that kinds of things in the entire world, although people are trying to pretend at least all the people on earth are equal.

I'm completely against it and I think we need to take it more seriously because that's one of the main issues facing us in today's world.

The issue could bring about warfare all over the world even if it's not the only cause.
Unfortunately, the nations are using it as a means of breaking through the situation they get into and simplifying how much power they have.
However, I think there're still some hopes that those conflicts can be resolved without resort to violence and forces.
We all should try our best to change the world to it is peacefully.

There're people that don't have as much of rights oppertunity to live as comfortably as the others.
Sometimes they have less of chances chance to be treated equally. For the most part, they are minority minorities and some even give them a cold shoulder.

I think it's not fair at all and it can't be right to think light of certain people's rights.

However, I think there may be certain rights that the minority members have, which shouldn't be traded off for the sake of anything else.
In that sense, I think we have to respect individual rights adequately.
Sorry to invert topics.

I look forward to your advice!
I'd appreciate it if you could correct my text.