Translation practice (Chinese to English) 《来自山区的小演员》（Part 2）

Please can you check my English translation of this text to see if I have understood and translated it correctly.Thank you.

剧组里的人介绍，两个孩子一个好动，一个好静。张慧科对车特别感兴趣，爱摆弄宾馆房间里的一切电器。而魏敏芝拍戏后养成爱看电影的习惯，也养成写日记，（、）写作文的习惯。她很认真得（地）琢磨词语，细心地记下自己的所见所闻。
The crew introduced two children, 1 very active, and 1 who was quiet. Zhang Huike was especially interested in the cars, and loved to play with the appliance in the guesthouse. After filming Wei Minzhi started to love watching movies, writing diaries, and essays too. She diligently pondered expressions, carefully recording everything she saw and heard.

魏敏芝告诉记者，自己在班上的作文成绩一直不错。拍戏以后眼界开阔了，作文内容有了很大的变化。她说：“回学校后于（与）老师，（、）同学相处跟以后（前）一样，没什么改变。因为拍戏耽误了一些功课，成绩有些下降，但现在都赶上去了。” Wei Minzhi told the reporter her essay grades at school are usually good. After filming her mind has broadened, the content of her essays have changed a lot. She said “After returning to school nothing has changed between me and my teachers and classmates. My grades dropped a little because filming delayed a few projects, but now I have caught up.”

这次周游15各大城市（在这次行程为15个城市的巡演中），不少观众见到魏敏芝，（、）张慧科都很亲切，有的观众送了图书等等（one "等" is enough）学习用品，希望他们踏踏实实地读书。“谢谢剧组，（、）张艺谋叔叔给我的机会，谢谢叔叔阿妹（阿姨）看我们演的电影。”在一个大城市巡回宣传中，在棉花（鲜花）和掌声中，魏敏芝真诚地说出这两句话。剧组里的人（+都说，）魏敏芝长大了，令人刮目相看。
On this 15 city tour, many people saw Wei Minzhi and Zhang Huilke were very close, they sent them atlas, and other study materials, hoping they will study hard. “Thank you to the crew and Uncle Zhang Yimou for giving me this opportunity, Thank you uncle Ah Mei for watching our movie.” said Wei Minzhi sincerely, amidst the flowers and applause at one of the city’s publicity event. People on the crew said, when Wei Minxhi grows up, she will make people see her in a new way

ps:您真的翻译的很好，很地道