My writing test

Hello everyone. I'm Linh and Kate in english, I'm from Vietnam. I have to complete my writing test in English, deadline is tommorow. I'd like to make this entry about my test. Glad to see if anyone could help me fix them as soon as possible. For your information: This test talks about imported medicine situation in Vietnam.

" Ministry Public Health has just announced a detailed plan to limit the foreign pharmaceutical firms to control the domestic pharmaceutical market and encouraged the domestic pharmaceutical firms to boost production activity. Moreover, the locals still like to use imported medicine more than the domestic ones, though all of it has the same quality. Thus, the many domestic pharmaceutical have to close doors because of the high cost of imported materials which leads to the cost of domestic medicine higher than foreign ones."

Looking for your help. Thanks in advance !

Linh.

Hi Linh,

  Your English is great! I have made a couple changes to the paragrph you provided. Please check them both, as I have added and substracted things. 

Good luck on your test. I am sure you will do amazing.