Feelings Have written such many Test paper, I think I still can not pass the exam, TEM

My Thought We will have TEM for students who major in English. I am a little nevors for the time is approching. My classmates all work harder for it, so I also can not give up, though I did not better than them

Should Online Bussiness be Banned? Online bussiness gradually become important part in our life. For example, we pay for what we bought from Internet in Electric Bank, or we invest in stock, etc. The function of online bussiness has spread many areas, so it can not be canned. Online bussiness is convenient and fast for us. We needn't to spend more time on road, rather sit next to the computer. If you want to know more about the shop or company, you just click your smouse. online business has not a new topic for our country. As we have seen, it almost have existed for 20 years. Beause of its developement, many relevant industries also have been improved. Looking narrowly, online shoppong industries provide more chance to develope the industry of emerging industries, stimulate the growth of economy. At present, Economic Globalization's impact have refered to all countries in the world. Most of bussiness were made through the network, so we will be eliminated if our online bussiness would be banned. As we discussed, onliness bussiness shouldn't be banned if we want to follow the trend of the wold. There may besome disadvantages at the present stage of online bussiness. However, we shouldn't ban it. what we should do is improving it and completing it. One day, online bussiness wil bring more covenience and benefits for us. I would be so grateful if you could read this for it 's too long. That is my writing assignment. Can you check it for me?