Dear diary

It’s a rainy Tuesday. I stayed up all night, because I was busy with my studies. I spent 80 RMB on <s>a</s> second-hand trading software to buy a one month group class of EF English<s>,</s>. I am a second-hand buyer<s>,</s>; other people can’t finish <s>those </s>the lessons, so it’s pretty cheap. I can take a lesson at any time if I want, and I kept listening <s>on </s>to the lesson <s>at </s>until 4AM last night.

English sentence

Because I immersed myself in learning a Japanese song called 糸. I had no time to write <s>the </s>a diary entry. Thus, maybe I will make sentences, using what I collected , if it happens in the future. (Remember I have various methods for persistence )

1.I am certainty of buying that marquee. I am certainly buying that marquee.

2.Her hair was stamped on her cheeks. Okay, but sounds weird unless this was in a novel.

3. I'm determined to experience what I never did. I'm determined to experience what I have never done.

4.The airplane came down. The airplane went down. This is okay if you mean crashed. "The airplane landed" = no crashing, everything is fine.

One Question:what circumstances can "come down" be used?

The trouble over the postgraduate ajusting

On December 21st, 2019, I <s>attended </s>took the post-graduate entrance examination ,getting <s>merely a result of</s> a mere 301 points <s>in on the 21 December,2019</s>.The score is too low <s>to gain admittion</s> for admission to enter my ideal university-"Southwest"<s>,</s>; therefore,I have to <s>prepare for the </s><s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">postgraduate </s><s>adjusting</s> <s>obtaining </s>obtain a postgraduate degree in another way to perfect myself <s>perpetually </s>and acquire a better job, to help <s>making </s>my family<s> to</s> live happily. While it (What is it?) also places more value on various other factors, such as CET-4, even 6, <s>experiences of science study</s> academic background, awards, teamwork ability and the like, <s>of course,</s>your score, of course, <s>also </s>is also indispensable. Embarrassingly,<s> on the hand,</s> my score is fairly low,<s>on the other hand </s>however, my ability failed to reach their <s>requires </s>requirements,so I am situated in a despairing <s>adversity </s>situation.

Plum blossom

Plum blossoms rank<s>s</s> among the top ten most famous flowers in China. <s>It </s>They originated in southern China and <s>has </s>have a history of more than 3,000 years of cultivation and planting. In the middle of winter, the colorful plum blossoms are not afraid of the cold, and bloom proudly (okay, but sounds weird unless this is poetry or something similar.) against the snow. In traditional Chinese culture, plum blossoms symbolize strength, purity, elegance, and encourage people to <s>fear </s>overcome hardships and move forward. Since ancient times, many poets and painters have taken inspiration from plum blossoms and have created countless immortal works. The general public also loves plum blossoms, which are often used for home decoration during <s>the </s>Spring Festival. Nanjing City has designated the plum blossom as the city flower<s>, and every</s> . Every year a plum blossom festival is held, and thousands of people brave<s>d</s> the cold to the plum blossom mountain to enjoy the plum blossoms.

Electives

College students are mature enough to make clear what they are interested in, and to make decisions on their own. Therefore, they should be given the right to choose electives, <s>either </s>relevant to their majors or not. But at the same time, the importance of basic classes and required classes should not be ignored, and too many extracurricular activities should be avoided.

After graduating from high school, students may have narrowed their academic interests. They will have <s>choose </s>chosen a major such as computer science, economics, languages <s>and so on</s> or something similar, but they may also have interests in something besides their major. Allowing <s>the </s>students to choose electives can benefit them in two ways: First, they may get a better academic experience at college. Second, it can ensure students have a comprehensive education so students will have a variety of skills, which they can apply at work. <s>So </s>This is why I think the school should give students the chance and encourage them to choose electives.

Is my sentence correct? Thank you!

This car is the very car I dream!

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I've seen this structure before ( "This is the very guy you told me about." very + noun), but it's very rare. Very usually comes before an adjective 形容詞 or adverb 副詞.

I would say "This is the car of my dreams" or "This is the car I've been dreaming of."