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    Do you like to travel?

    Everyone knows that our planet is very big. Our planet is so impressive, exciting and beautiful! It's impossible to stay in one place all live for one's whole life, I believe. When on you travel, you can become stronger, make new acquaintances, learn more about the world we live in and get rid of prejudices about different countries. It's our planet and, in my opinion, we should see it all. Thanks for your attention!

     

    What a great entry! You expressed some complex ideas - you must have worked very hard to become so proficient in English!!

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    March 30, 2014
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    So Angry

    The weather is shiny sunny, however but I feel so irritated. My mother always forces me to do housework - washing clothes, dishes, sweeping the floor, which exacerbates my nerves. But spending lots many hours doing housework ended up with her dissatisfaction**. Finally, we were in a fierce quarrel.......

     

    **I am not sure what you are trying to say here. Are you saying your mother was not happy even after you spent hours doing the housework?

     

    Good entry! Please keep writing!!

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    March 30, 2014
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    I feel helpless.

    I'm trying to learn English, but I'm very troubled because I can't stop thinking* in Portuguese. It's so disappointing. ** "Troubled" = adjective form. "Trouble" = noun
    But, the hurtful part of this is that I can't talk. ** "Hurtful" = adjective. "Hurt" = noun

    I stop everytime. But I'm well to write and read good at writing* and reading*, but when I need to talk, I brake. And now I'm trying to change this. In my future work, I won't need to talk very much, I hope. Basically, I'll need to translate some instruction manuals, so speaking* will not be necessary. But, I want to travel to Canada at the end of course. I'll need to talk fluently, sure. There, I will definitely need to talk fluently.
    Thanks for reading.

     

    *Present progressive form (-ing) - read about it when you have an opportunity!

     

    Don't give up!! Your writing is very good :-)

    I am learning a language, too, and I am very nervous about speaking.

    I hope you have found some English conversation partners through this site. Everyone here is learning, and no one will laugh at you if you make mistakes!

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    March 30, 2014
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    I described a scene of The Big Bang Theory Season Seven <== Past tense?

    I watched the fourth episode of The Big Bang Theory Season Seven just now. In a scene,Stuart (a shopkeeper of a comic book store) and Leonard are putting dating profiles online. Stuart said a makeup was necessary before taking a picture to be used for profiles because when someone looked at his dating profile, the first thing they saw was his picture. He just wanted to make sure he looked full of life. And Stuart put "unobjectionable" as the one-word description of himself and "not applicable" for his best feature. Leonard said Stuart was being too hard on himself because he'd got had a lot of good stuff going on.

     

    **Good summary! When you use a comma "," make sure you put a space after it.

    For example: Great notebook entry, Hu Shu Chang!

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    March 30, 2014
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    NO.5 I've just had a Haircut

    Oh my! What did I do?! I've just had a haircut. This guy girl(1) in front of me in the mirror is so strange to me. She's not the person I knew yesterday or anytime(2). The barber cut my fringes really short. What a ugly girl in front of me in the mirror! I feel sad. I wish my hair would grow quickly so I can be myself again.
    This is a just short diary. But it's involved contains(3) all my feelings.

     

    (1) "Guy" refers to males. You use "girl" in the 7th sentence, so maybe you knew that already!

    (2) "Yesterday" used in that way doesn't just mean the day before today. It means "yesterday or any other time." It's something people say when they are thinking about the past sometimes.

    (3) If you say "contains all my feelings," that means you put all your feelings into it. I think this is what you were trying to say.

     

    Human hair grows at an average rate of 1.25cm per month - don't worry :-)

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    March 26, 2014
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    March 25, 2014
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    Very first diary

    Recently, I've felt that I should start to practice English writing.  Good!

    But I barely know about expressions in English. *Avoid starting sentences with "But"

    *Suggestion: However, (means same thing as "but") I barely know how to express myself in English.

    Even I have  Right now I have no chance to get feedback on my writing from people who are mother tongue of English native English speakers.

    So, I have decided to publish my weird diaries to you via this service. :)

    And I want to get teach from be taught by you**. I always welcome any writing corrections on my diary.  **Suggestion: I want you to teach me.

    Just tell me the mistakes that I may make from now or even just previous sentences. *not sure what you're trying to say here.

    For paying To repay your efforts, I am definitely going to offer Korean (which is my mother tongue) correction on your diaries in my best. I will do my best.

    So, if you want to learn about Korean expressions and culture, just let me know and I will give you a hand for helping. *The American idiomatic expression is "give you a hand" - means the same thing as "help you." Nice use of colloquial language!!
     

    My status is same as following Here is my information:

    Sex: man *usually we say "male"
    Age: 24
    Nation: Korea
    Living now: Seoul
    Hometown: Busan
    Education: senior at Sejong Univ.
    Major: Computer science
    Experience: Android Application publish, Web development, Data Science, Complexity Research etc.

    Please contact to me.

     

    **Great entry! Please keep writing, I enjoyed reading it.

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    March 23, 2014
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    I wrote a recruitment advertising. Please help me correct and polish it.

    Native English speakers - Paid Tutoring or Language Exchange Opportunity!! 

    Junior at Harbin Medical University (Heilongjiang, China) seeks fun, friendly conversation partner

     * No experience required

     * Flexible hours (prefer 4 x 1 hour sessions/week)

     * Desire to learn Mandarin a plus!

    Location: Number One Student Apartment, Harbin Medical University

    Hourly rate: Competitive - please contact for more information

    Call XXX for more information!

     

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    March 23, 2014
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    NO.4 Say Goodbye to my past

    It's been a long time since I wrote a passage. It's not a good behavior to learn a language or any subject, but I'm still get too tired to write something down. Maybe that's because I thought all I have written is* rubbish and equal to nothing. When I read my college English book, I always become** confused. Why are there still so many English sentences I do not understand? Why can't I write beautiful sentences like other writers? Why can't I speak like a native speaker? I have learned English for so many years, who can help me out of this? I lose confidence sometimes but I'm still strong to keep on. The good news is I past passed the most important English text in college, the CET-4. For a higher goal I decided to take part in the next level, the CET-6, and I'm busy with it. The test will be in June. Wish me luck, my friends. Whatever the trouble is in our way, the life will still go on. So say goodbye to the past and say hello to tomorrow. Tomorrow is a better day.

     

    *This verb goes with "all I have written". While you have written more than 1 thing, "all I have written" is a singular phrase, so use "is" instead of "are." If you said instead "all the <em>entries</em> I have written," that would be plural and you would use "are".

     

    **You wrote: I always confused. We need a verb in this sentence. Options:

         (1) I <em>am</em> always confused.

         (2) I always become confused.

         (3) I always get confused. (means the same as #2, but less formal)

     

    Great job. As they say in Japanese, がんばって.

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    March 22, 2014
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