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  • Corrected

    A formal letter "missing bank card"

    Dear Sir / Madam,

    I am writing in connection with a missing or stolen credit card, provided by Algeria Gulf Bank and delivered from bank's head office to client account number 32548574 14. tThis is an urgent letter concerning my the new bank card related to my account number that was sent by the bank.

    Yesterday, I received an envelope from the bank's head office in which is in the bay branch of Algiers, asking me to acknowledge receipt of my new bank card. However, after I had read all of the details and I discovered that there is was no credit card attached. More importantly, I checked the envelope and the mail box several times and discovered that the bottom of the envelope had been tampered with, indicating that the card had perhaps been stolen.  realized a tattered state on the bottom of the envelope. I suppose someone had stolen my card.

    For this reason I request that am asking you to cancel my new credit card immediately, before they use it to spend my money if it is taken by the wrong hands. After canceling my card, please, and send me a new one as soon as possible.  because I need to use it abroad this week.

    Thank you kindly in advance,

    Yours faithfully,
    Mr. Ahmed

     

    Mr Ahmed, the corrections I suggest are minor, your letter is quite clear.  I have also suggested deleting some of the details that a bank would not require.  Also, credit cards cannot be used until they are activated by the correct owner so your credit should be safe.  Good luck  حظ سعيد

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    March 16, 2014
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  • Corrected

    Invitation

    how to say , Do you mind to go out for a coffee??

    هل تمانع ان نخرج لنشرب القهوة؟؟

    You are close...

    You can say, "Would you like to go out for a coffee?" which is a simple invitation or

    "Do you mind if we go out for a coffee?" in which you are asking if the addressee would mind or be inconvenienced by going out for a coffee.

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    March 16, 2014
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  • Posted
    مقدمة اسمي تد مع ذلك في فصلي عربية كنت اسمي مجد من قبل أستاذي عربية. حنعزل في مصر الصيف الجاي لي ثلاثة سنين. عايز اتعلم اللغة العربية و اللهجة المصرية برضه.
    March 16, 2014
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  • Corrected

    Today

    Today the weather is quite cold. I prefered to stay at home. I have a big test at school tomorrow, but I don't care. I want to goof off at home. Who wants do you want to go out at in this weather? I am a succesful student in my college, because I care about school that. There is only one thing missing, which . this is speaking english well. If I can achieve thatthis happens, everything will be fantastic. Also, we passed intermediate level in English, but I do not speak at this that level. Nevertheless I am quite good very much in at tests. I hope my speaking will be better fine soon.

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    March 16, 2014
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  • Commented

    Quite good, although one small correction:  "When you wear short sleeves and shorts, will you worry about your figure."

    Also, the term "figure" in this context refers more to one's total physique or overall physical fitness overall rather than just the arms or legs.

    In english, it would be more common to say something like, "Summer is coming.  When you wear short sleeves and shorts, will you worry about how you look?"

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    March 16, 2014
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  • Answered
    أنا أحب اكل مشوي زي فراخ او لحمة او سمك مع خضارات . مع ذلك أحب جبنة مع تفاح او أخر وجبة صحي زي سلطة طازة.
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    March 16, 2014
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  • Posted
    بلدي أول فكرة اليوميات أنا أكملت أول دورة عربية وهذه هي المرة الأولى لي في كتابة مذكراتي.
    March 16, 2014
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