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     盘古开天辟地。

    It is a folk story.Long long ago, there is a big star on the air and the star likes a big egg. There is a giant named PanGu in the star. He axe the star for out. After 18,000 years, he make it. The star broke in two。The above part of the star became the air and the below part of the star became the earth.

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    June 29, 2014
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    她来自中国。她来自中国山西省。

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    June 28, 2014
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    Your Chinese is good, but not very correct. Our Chinese would not say that like this.Sorry, my English is bad. 你中文的中文表达已经很很好了,只是还不够准确(或者说是地道),所以我按照我的想法进行了修改。

    如果是我,我会这样写:

    亲爱的儿子,不要灰心 其他的人一见到你,会以为你只是一个普通的十三岁男孩。

    可他们看不见你心里的秘密。 我一见到你,便知你与众不同(这是一个成语)。

    我明白你所有的困难(如果程度更深,可以用“苦难”)。

    其他人一见到你,就只能看到一个有限的未来。

    我一看到你,却能看见一个不一样的未来。(I would like to use“无限的未来”)

    其他人一看到你,就只能看到一个负担。

    我一看到你,却能看到我的幸福。(Do you mean your son can make you happy)。

    亲爱的儿子,不要灰心,长得与其他人一样,并非一件绝妙的的事。

    即使别人都避开你,妈妈永远都会陪在你的身边。

     

     

    P.S.The last correction have a fault.

    “其他人一看到你,就设想一个办不到的未来,我一看到你就【不能】想象一个不同的未来。”

    “其他人一看到你,就设想一个办不到的未来,我一看到你就【能】想象一个不同的未来。”

     

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    June 28, 2014
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    亲爱的儿子,不要灰心

    其他人一看到你,就以为你仅仅是一个正常的十三岁的男生。他们看不到你在心里的秘密。
    我一看你,就知道你与别人不一样。 我知道你所有的困难。
    其他人一看到你,就设想一个办不到的未来,我一看到你就不能想象一个不同的未来。
    其他人一看到你,就(只能)看到一个负担,我一看到你,就看到我的幸福。
    亲爱的儿子,不要灰心,长得与其他人一样,并不是一件绝妙的的事。
    即使别人都避开你,妈妈永远都会在你的身边。

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    June 28, 2014
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    Essays3-A course you learned at middle school,university or evening class. what the course was? what you did at school,university or evening class? who taught the course and explain what you learned from the course? I'm a junior student majoring in Chinese literature and language, but we also need accept the traditional academic education, so we have to study world literature. It is a subject about the world’s national literatures. The course have 2 parts: classical literature and modern literature. In the class,we read poems, novels, fictions,essays and so on. Some of my friends think my college life must be very easy. In fact, I have many homework to do. As a professional reader, you need to read all kinds of works instead of reading what you like. Moreover, you have to read some culture theories and literature theories. Our teacher Lao will teach us how to read and analysis the masterpieces. Sometimes, theories mean boring. While in his class, it would never happen, because he is so humorous and wise man. From the course, I learnt how to criticize reasonable and rightly. No only that. I can remember the lines in Dead Poets Society. We don't read and write poetry because it's cute. We read and write poetry because we are members of the human races, and the human races is filled with passion. And medicine,law,business,engineering, these are noble pursuit and necessary to sustain life.But poetry, beauty, romance, love, these are what we stay alive for. For me, the course let be know be a human's meaning.
    June 28, 2014
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    June 26, 2014
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    Essay2-A famous person in your country When it comes to a famous person in my country, I think about Sun Yat-sen who was a Chinese revolutionary, first president and founding father of the Republic of China. He’s one of most well-known for Chinese people. He played a important role during the years leading up to the Double Ten Revolution. Besides he co-founded the Kuomintang. But what impressed me is his spirit instead of his achievement. In his early life, he suffered from frequent exile. His life can be said full of failure, but he never gave up. He just insist his direction, and kept going until he arrived at the destination. From my point of view, he was a really great man who fought bravely for their national independence, liberation, democracy and freedom. Nowadays, in many major Chinese cities, there will be one of the main streets is named Zhongshan Lu (中山路) to celebrate his memory. In sum, he was the most important politician in 20th-century.
    June 26, 2014
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    Essay1-A film you dislike When it comes to a film that i dislike, I want to describe Tiny Times. I didn't want to watch this movie before. My friends invest me watch it, and then I join in it. After that, I just want to beat my friends.The film enhance my tolerance for bad movies. Actually, there are crazy fans of the movie, and also many haters like me. First, I had to say it's a really boring story. I watched it for half hour and just couldn't help not getting bored. The director is ambitious, meanwhile he is incompetent. He want to tell a story about four men and four women, but obviously he failed. Besides, I hate the endless placement. Come on, I come to the theater for film not for advertisement! Last but not least,I think the film can't resonate within the real world. It's a story about college student, but as a college student, I think it is far from reality. Girls can get anything whatever they want. Everyone can get ahead easily. But you know, life was like a box of chocolate, you know what you're going to get. In China, action must be the most popular kind of films. Many people enjoy seeing movie in the cinema because they like the fantastic audio effect. It's obviously that the action movies can cater audience. For young people, generally speaking, they prefer comedy. Our school host a film festival every year. This year, after the event, we made some questionnaires. And it shows young people are prefer comedy.
    June 26, 2014
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    Swimming Swimming is my favourite sport. There is a very wide range of styles of modern swimsuits, which vary in relation to body coverage and materials. Women's swimsuits are generally described as one-piece, bikinis, or thongs. As far as my concerned, one-piece is the best choice.men's swimsuit styles include jammers, swim trunks, briefs and so on. Besides, you need Goggles and a bathing cap. Goggles can help you keep your eyes open while you swim so that you can see where you're going. The bathing cap can protect the hair from the chlorine in the water. Usually, people will swim in the swimming pool. Many people are likely to go to the beach that they can swim in the sea and feel nature. And I have make a stupid mistake. Someday I went to the swimming pool with my friend. We are both nearsighted. We took off our glasses and ran into women's dressing room. The staff shut to us,"Where are you going! There is men's dressing room!" Oh! How awkward! Even so, it is still one of the best forms of physical exercises and a versatile sport. In my opinion, swimming is also a marvelous way to relax and keep fit. It is not difficult to learn swim. What you need to do is just to overcome your fear of water. It's very fun to swim.
    March 18, 2014
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    Multicultural societies Many people are concerned about multi-ethnic country bring more benefits for a country. I agree with the view that multicultural societies are more activer and healthier. First, the culture just like the biosphere, different ethnic's cultures can keep a balance. One country can overcome it's weaknesses by acquiring other's strong points that the single-ethnic can not do. Moreover, multicultural societies can promote more cultural exchange that fuel economic growth. The different fashion also can develop new focuses of customer spending. That is not to say multi-ethnic country have no shortcoming. Of course, it may course dissensions due to variant cultural custom. So, we can not jump to conclusion. In sum, multicultural societies, which are mixture of different ethnic groups, bring more benefits than drawbacks for a country.
    March 9, 2014
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