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Hi, I'm a Singaporean and the unique thing about Singaporeans is that we all speak English and one mother tongue; and for me that is Mandarin Chinese. Currently looking to improve my speaking and listening skills in French, I would love to teach you English, Mandarin Chinese or even Singlish (colloquial Singaporean English) if you could help improve my French!
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    About me

    I was a teenerager (teenager) when I discovered that it was impossible to learn English or another other languages, and my wish was always was to learn to talk,write,read and listen in English (or other languages) , right now I am an adult and I have several responsabilities, with my home family (or if you mean the physical object, 'house) , and only with a second language i can can I achieve my goal ,which is to talk speak, understand and listen in English.

    I don't have enought vocabulary , my grammar is bad, and it is difficult to my for me to say something easy and fast quickly and easily , because I don't have any friends to help me, and I really need a friend to learn, and I don't have money to pay a teacher here in my country, their they are so expensive, and comercial commercialised people, I hope to find someone or make more friends in this year, through Italki, thanks for this opportunity and God Bless All of us.

     

    Some simple corrections. You might want to cut your sentences as they are pretty long right now. Insha'Allah you will learn to speak, write, read and listen in English! Learning languages is a lifetime process so don't sweat it!

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    January 30, 2014
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    Talking I want to talk about a restaurant or store called “Casa do Norte” in Brazilian Southeast. in Southeeastern Brazil, (or the Brazilian Southeast, with the article 'the')

    Casas do Norte (North Houses in English) are restaurants which serve food from the semi-arid Northeastern Brazil region that cooking foods from Brazilian Northeast, semi-arid region, or are stores that selling foods, candies, drinks or things from the Northeast. Sometimes they are both a restaurant and store in the same space.
    They always are are always decorated with objects from Northeastern northeast culture like hats, bottles, horns, etc.
    They are very popular in the Brazilian Southeast , mainly in the states of Rio and Sau Paulo Rio and Sao Paulo States, because there are many foods and drinks which the Southeast doesn't have don't have in southeast and there are a large number of northeastern migrants who arrive in (or 'come to') the Southeast to looking for jobs and they likes to eat your (whose? Southeastern?) foods and take a make contact with your culture. (Note: The sentence is pretty long, so you might want to separate it or use commas ',' instead of repeatedly using 'and')
    Some natives southeast Southeastern natives like to eat Northeastern foods too.
    I 'm sometimes going to a “Casa do Norte” to eat . Food that your can find - “Sarapatel, Buchada de Bode, Caldeirada, Baião de Dois” and (or 'among') others.
    The candy more popular most popular candy is “Rapadura”(candy made with sugar cane) but there are others candies. Drinks like handmade “Cachaça” (alcoholic drink made with sugar cane) for example.

    Simple corrections on your note.

    It's always good to learn about other cultures! Keep up the good work!

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    Story-Part 2 & 3

    Part 2--出国一年,回来时妈妈已患上老年痴呆,迷迷糊糊,不认人。
    chū guó yī nián, huí lái shí mā mā yǐ huàn shàng lǎo nían chī dāi,mí mí hū hū,bú rèn rén.
    [When i come back after a year of going abroad,mother has had Alzheimer's Disease,difficult to make out anyone.]

    Coming back from a year living overseas, my mother had contracted (这是“患上”直接翻译成的英文字)Alzheimer's Disease, and could not recognise anyone. ("make out" 是英文俚语里的编译词,可能指的是与其他人亲热!所以使用 “recognise" 不单单是直接从英语翻译,也是比较适当的翻译)


    我走到床边看她时,她竟忽然冲我笑了。说:“你胖了。”
    wǒ zǒu dào chuáng bīan kàn tā shí,tā jìng hū rán chòng wǒ xiào le, shuō:"nǐ pàng le."
    [When i visited her at her bedside, she said suddenly with a smile to me ,you increased weight.]

    When I visited her at her bedside, she suddenly said with a smile, to me, "you gained weight" (谈到体重英文使用 "gain" 而不是 "increase" )


    Part 3--今天做火车,两个老婆婆坐在我身边,其中一个是来送另一个的,
    jīn tīan zuò huǒ chē , lǐang gè lǎo pó pó zuò zài wǒ shēn biān, qí zhōng yī gè shì lái sòng lìng yī gè de,
    [When i was taking the train today,there was two old women sitting by my side.One of them was to send another.]

    When I was taking the train today, there were two old women sitting by my side. One of them was coming to send the other off.


    两人双手拉在一起不停念叨着。
    liǎng rén shuāng shǒu lā zài yī qǐ bù tíng niàn dāo zhe.
    [Two old women hold hands and keep talking all the time.]

    Both of them held hands and would not stop talking.


    要发车了,一个老婆婆下车,回头说了句话:
    yào fā chē le, yí gè lǎo pó pó xìa chē,
    [When the train was going to set off,one of them got off and turned her head to say,
    “姐啊,今年我89岁,你90岁,这是我们这辈子最后一次见面了....”
    huí tóu shuō le jù huà:"jǐe a,jīn nían wǒ 89 suì, nǐ 90 suì,zhè shì wǒ mén zuì hòu yí cì jiàn miàn le..."
    [my dear elder sister,i was 89 years old this year, you were 90 years old. This was our last meeting in our life.]

    When the train was about to set off, one of them got off and turned her head to say, "My dear elder sister, this year I am 89, while you are 90, and this will be the last meeting we have in our lives." (因为指的是现在所发生的事故,说到两位的岁数时运用 present tense,而不是 past tense。 最后一次见面也因此运用 future tense, 因为两人还未分散。)

     

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    January 29, 2014
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    原文:

    Happy new year

    With time went on ,a new year is coming.Today is a cleaning day .All my family are cleaning the house, my father wiped the windows, my mom washed clothes and my mainly work is helping them ,We so tired now.

     

    誊清:

    As time went on, a new year is coming. Today we did spring cleaning 你提到华人新年要来临,通常华人大扫除我们使用 "spring cleaning" 来代替,因为 "cleaning" 指的是普通日子在家扫除。My entire family were cleaning the house (或 My entire family cleaned the house); my father wiped the windows, my mom washed the clothes and my work was mainly helping them out. We are so tired now.

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    January 29, 2014
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    介绍 - 新项目

    大家好!你们好吗?我叫,我二十二岁, 我住在巴西,我说葡萄牙语和英语。
    今天我想开始一个新项目。
    我打算在一年内学习中文,我明白在这时间内我是不可能学会读或听,所以我决定学习如何写,与说。
    在未来的日子里,我将录制视频并张贴在这里,我希望你能帮助纠正我的错误。
    上帝保佑你。
    再见。

    :)

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    January 29, 2014
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    Le nouvel an chinois à Singapour Singapour est un petite ile dans l'Asie, et sa population est principalement chinois. Alors, bien sur, et car nous sommes chinois, nous célébrons le nouvel an chinois aussi. Je ne sais pas si le nouvel an chinois à Singapour est différent que le nouvel an en Chine, mais pour nous, nous nous levons tôt le prémier jour de l'an, et les enfants saluent leurs parents. Ensuite, normalement, les parents leur donneront les 'paquets rouges' qui ont l'argent à l'intérieur. Oui, vous avez bien entendu, nos parents nous donneront l'argent pendant la fête! Le couleur rouge porte bonheur dans la culture chinois. Je vais arrêter ici car je pense que mon français est très mauvais et je ne continue plus. Aidez-moi corriger mon français afin que je peux devenir mieux dans cette langue! Si tu as besoin de aide dans l'anglais ou le chinois, n'hésitez pas laisser un message!
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