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I am a driver. I have a drivers license. I have both a car and a bicycle. They are in a garage. The car is red. The bicycle has a sidecar. I driveride the bicycle during the warm season. It stays in the garage all winter through. No doubt a car is the more convenient vehicle than a bike. But I get the last gives me more pleasure from driving.
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Over the next few decades, Malaysia is expected to experience a rapid increase in the number and proportion of elderly in its population. Statistics estimate that the number of Malaysians aged 60 and above is 1.4 million with a projected increase to 3.3 million by 2020 (Mafauzy, 2000). The population of people aged 65 and above is expected to increase by 6.4 percent from 2010 to 2040 (Department of Statistics, 2013).
