Talking about the future

Currently I'm studying education at University. I'm a third year student, therefore next year I will get my degree in teaching (I hope). After this career I would like to achieve one of my dreams; living in America and learning how to survive there on my own. I want to continue my studies or find a job there.

It'll be tough, I know, but people were born to take risks, improve themselves everyday, and face challenges. 

Have a nice weekend =)

My favorite musicians are

Ok, I accept that I'm not as young as I would like to be, but when I think of music I think of old music instead of modern music. I think that's because I knew that music when I was younger, but some young people love these songs too.

Ozzy Osbourne is one of my favorites, and next to him I like Iron Maiden - both of them sound like an angel's chorus.

But there are two modern artists that I also enjoy: Lady Gaga and Gossip.  

Yes, I know. These artists have very different music styles.

It's a contradiction that I can't understand, but what can I do? I love to listen to all of them.

Can you fix my recruitment, please ???

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I tried not to change too many things from your original, in case I accidentally changed the intended meaning of something. I would have worded certain things differently, and will post that version in a comment on this post. I didn't want to change things that weren't technically wrong in this version, I just think certain things would sound better with a different wording. Overall there weren't too many errors, good job! 

Composition about advantages and disadvantages of being famous

This is a composition I have done for homework:

The majority of people would like to be famous, because it seems to be the perfect job. Being famous brings you the opportunity for everybody to know about you and your work, gaining respect and public recognition. In addition, famouse people can live a life full of luxury because of the money they earn in their works. For instance, good actors in Hollywood can earn more than thirty million dollars for one of their movies.

This all seems very tempting, however there are some disadvantages. The main disadvantage is that famous people have no private life. There are paparazzis who follow them twenty-four hours a day wherever they go. For example, a simple task like going shopping with your family can be something difficult because of the people that follow you to take photos or ask you for an autograph. Another disadvantage is that people start rumors about celebrities that can affect them in many different ways because of the horrible things that people can say.

In conclusion, being famous could seem a great thing at the first sign, but you have to consider all of its bad aspects and how it can change your life, because your business is not only yours anymore, it's everybody's apparently.

This is good! There were only some minor errors. I think that a couple things, like the addition of extra letters onto a word, may have even just been typos. 

I like writing poems

I like writing poems because when I write them, I can express my emotions in another way. My sister and mother both enjoy my poems, but my father doesn't like them. He thinks they aren't important, but I think this is a good art form. When I write poems, I can express things that I think and like.  This is incredible, this is similar to writing a song.

I want to write poems in English like I do in Spanish, but I think I need so much time to do it. I think so much in Spanish, and English grammar structure is very different from Spanish grammar. But I hope one day I can write poems in English.