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    大家好 我姓stephenson.我叫名字Elizabeth. 我是美国人。我中文中得很不好。我汉字汉得很不错。 我喜欢看书, 听音乐 谢谢
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    Americans hate Chinese?

    Living in the U.S. for a few years, I heard of several sayings:

    - Americans hate Chinese because they are all communists.

    - Americans hate Chinese because Chinese steal their jobs/resources.

    - Americans hate Chinese because Asians are not charming, especially Asian boys -- the least popular group in the U.S..

    - American hate Chinese because they share too few things, such as values, hobbies, and habits.

    Are these correct? Anybody has any ideas?

     

    I am American and I don't really hate Chinese people at all. I am learning Mandarin myself. I am sure you will find in every location small groups of people who dislike those who are not from thier country. Can you think of things that Chinese people say about Americans? Much the same. 

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    could anyone make my essay more American Way? Thanks a lot.

    Very appreciate your help. And if you need help, please feel free remind me anytime.
    The most basic reason that I am willing to transfer is that I want to pursue better opportunities for my major- Biomedical Engineering. To know more detailed academic information and research contents of universities , I would like to browse websites. After entering the homepage and clicking into Research link, a brand-new world of technology grasped my eyes. One of the most impressive researches to me is "Identity swap", producing brain cells by converting skin cells. I am so interested in such kind of research. Therefore, for further study, I am more inclined to bioinformatics and cellular technology, especially genetics engineering. It is very clear for me to choose my future pursuit and career.
    The second but more subjective reason is that I want to challenge myself. As an inspirational proverb says," If a person does not force himself to one, he will not know how good he will be" (Chao Gao, 2012, Good is pushed out, China, East Press) Therefore, I want to try my best to apply for my dream schools, as if ascend mountain to summit. If I give up and just satisfy present conditions- a stable job, top student in my class, going to party on Friday, I will definitely be regretful in my future. I am ambitious rather than take things as they are. What I like to do is to challenge my life ceaselessly.
            My goals in the coming two years are that first I want to work for research groups with professors as a volunteer. I will search for research opporunities in these interests areassuch as cellular function and gene expression on tissue engineering or techniques on the cell migration and cancer metastasis and e-mail professors for opportunities,. From experiments, I can learn many, not only the skills not only how to use equipments in the right way, but also a cooperative team work and leadership with partners. At the same time, I will try my best to apply for tutor as my part-time job, in which I can help others by what I have learnt learned while earning pocket money because I want to be more financially independent. Then I want to join in honors program. I am a honor student in my present university, and I believe I am still continue to be outstanding after transferring. With my struggling, I hope to join Tau Beta Pi honor society and win departmental awards. There are great opportunities for outstanding students, in terms of several major related internship and several awards for biomedical engineering.

     

    Feel free to message me to discuss more

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    could anyone make my essay more American Way? Thanks a lot.

    Very appreciate your help. And if you need help, please feel free remind me anytime.

    The most basic reason biggest reason that I am willing to transfer (where? put location/college?) is that because I want to pursue better opportunities for my major- Biomedical Engineering. I want to know more detailed academic information and research contents opportunities of universities (are you applying to several universities?) , .I would like to browse websites. Everyone likes surfing. It doesn't do anything for your essay. After entering the opening your homepage and clicking into onto  the Research link, a brand-new world of technology grasped my eyes. One of the most impressive researches research to me is the "Identity swap", producing brain cells by converting skin cells. I am so interested in such this kind of research. Therefore, for further study, I am more inclined to bioinformatics and cellular technology, especially genetics engineering. It is very clear for me to choose my future pursuit and career with this type of research. 
    The second but more subjective reason is that I want to challenge myself. As an inspirational proverb says," If a person does not force himself to one, he will not know how good he will be" (Chao Gao, 2012, Good is pushed out, China, East Press) Therefore, I want to try my best to apply for my dream schools, as if ascend mountain to summit. If I give up and just satisfy present conditions- a stable job, top student in my class, going to party on Friday, I will definitely be regretful in my future. I am ambitious rather than take things as they are. What I like to do is to challenge my life ceaselessly.
    My goals in the coming two years are that first I want to work for research groups with professors as a volunteer. I will search for interests areas and e-mail professors for opportunities, such as cellular function and gene expression on tissue engineering or techniques on the cell migration and cancer metastasis. From experiments, I can learn many, not only the skills to use equipments in the right way, but also a cooperative team work and leadership with partners. At the same time, I will try my best to apply for tutor as my part-time job, which I can help others by what I have learnt while earning pocket money because I want to be more financially independent. Then I want to join in honor program. I am a honor student in my present university, and I believe I am still outstanding after transferring. With my struggling, I hope to join Tau Beta Pi honor society and win departmental awards. There are great opportunities for outstanding students, in terms of several major related internship and several awards for biomedical engineering.

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    Welcome to Italki

    Hi, im very happy because i discover this site. This night im in the bed now, but i have energy to learn. My dreams are travel to Europe, in special Italy, France an Greece. Happy new year!!

    Hello just a few corrections:

    "i" on it's own is always capitalized as "I". "This night im in the bed now" could better be phrased as - Tonight, I'm in the bed right now, but I have the energy to learn." " in special Italy, France an Greece." This should be "especially Italy, France and Greece." 

    Happy New year! 

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