Job invitation

A few months ago I had a English text in which I needed write a essay with this title. I would like if someone could revise it for me.

Dear Mr Antoni, 
First of all I would like leave my sincere gratitude in receipt of this good proposal. I am very proud to know the respect that you have for me.
Despire of I really wanted to get this job opportunity. when I know it will be so important in developing my career in our company and it could also be a great chance to improve my English language. At the same time, I could live in that amazing country with such a different culture, language and lifestyle.
How could I write this message without leaving bad feelings about my ability to hold this position? Unfortunately at this delicate moment in my life when I need take this difficult decision in my professional career, when something very bad has been happened with my family and because of this I can't able to accept this great opportunity. It is more necessary I remain here together with my family.
I am extremely sorry about this, but I hope you understand my situation and not think that it is not a simple excuse that I made. Sincerely I want to receive this proposal again in the future, when I can enjoy it with great enthusiasm.

Writing Day #7

Today I found out that my brother will come over to stay ten days in my home. He lives in Rio de Janeiro with our parents and my other brother. Of the three siblings, myself, Lucas, and Rodrigo, and I am the eldest. I live in Minas Gerais, it's five hundreds kilometers from Rio, but is's only forty minutes flying. Fortunately, my house is very close to the airport, so on Sunday morning we will meet my brother there and soon we will be home. Even better, when he leaves, me and my wife and I will go to Rio with him to visit our parents. I think we will have a great time together.

Degree modifiers exercise

Hi. Today I'm going to write an exercise about degree modifiers. I hope someone could rate my it.

1. There is too much noise in the street.

2. How many people do you want to help you?

3. They do QUITE a lot of business in the Middle East.

4. He speaks QUITE a few languages.

5. There are QUITE too many weapons in the world.

6. Much of philospophy is concerned with questions nobody can answer.

7. MOST of the city was without electricity last night.

8. We have bought a lot of butter.

9. I think you have made RATHER a lot of mistakes.

10. This weather KIND OF gets on my nerves.

[It seems like your problem is choosing between 'much' and 'many'. Many is used only for countable objects, while much is more of an abstract concept. e.g. I have <em>many</em> siblings [countable]. How <em>much</em> is it? [abstract]]

Why not?

Well. Hello stranger. Let's start from the beginning. My name is Danila. I'm a Russian student in Saint-Petersburg. I want to learn the English language and find out about other cultures. I'd like to travel in Europe. But I have a very difficult problem. I can't absolutely to talk and express my opinion. So... I need somebody to help with that. I will be very thankful :)

The challenge of learning a new language to get a job in a foreign country

Hi all! A few years ago I decided my future would have been in the UK. Let me tell you why. I'm a student of medicine in a little town called Brescia (northern Italy), and I have been studying at my university for 6 years. Here in Italy the possibility of getting the specialization after the graduation is quite low, as the government has cut the financing for the schools of specialization every year. On the other hand, I'd like to work in a much more advanced field of medicine in England. In order to try to continue my studies in the UK, I began to look for some English courses with native speakers. I found an amazing course with an Irish teacher. His method is really original: he uses the signs to improve the vocabulary and to learn new grammar rules, and he creates some games to enhance the speaking and listening skills as well. I'm so glad to be in that English school. I'm going to get the IELTS certificate, because it's necessary to apply for the foundation programme, the training programme for the British physicians. I hope to achieve that goal! I'd like to find someone willing to converse 50/50 in English and Italian, not only to make their language-speaking better, but also because I love to know new people from other countries.
Bye!