Penpal letter - help with structure and grammar needed.
我住在大公寓随着我的室友和小,很可爱狗。我的狗叫Bella。我的公寓是附近市中心也海边。我的室友和我最喜欢在海边溜达。我的公寓是非常方便市大学,开车只取十五分钟。我家在海边我喜欢溜狗那因为风景很美。我家有七个房间,二个卧室,一个卫生间,一个客厅,一个厨房,一个书房 和一个饭厅。我的卧室是很大。我的卧室有一个大床,一个衣柜,一个床头柜,一个电脑,一个电视,和一个床头灯。我喜欢我的卧室因为很舒服。附近我的家那儿是很公共设施譬如,银行,商店,邮局和餐厅。我的街坊邻里是很漂亮也很安静。
May 31, 2014
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Anyone can help me check few sentences? Thanks!
In this top international company, the materials and equipment are imported from Asia, America and Europe. To avoid delaying the schedule of the manufacturing process, my primary responsibility is to arrange those shipments to arrive at the factory on time.