I think Shanghai is a very nice, stylish, neat, modern, culinary <em>city compared to other cities.</em> But I would prefer <em>to live in </em>other <em>cities </em>such as Xi'an, Haikou, Kunming etc. These cities have <em>natural </em>landscapes and a slower <em>pace </em>of life. <em>I've been </em>bored here <em>recently. </em>

Nice work. I've just made it sound a little more smooth. 

First snow

Today it snowed. <em>Large snow flakes fell to the ground.</em> It was very beautiful. I love that <em>type of </em>weather <em>where you can</em> sit at home and look out the window. <em>It</em> was very relaxing.)

Good effort. I miss snow. 

Russian Culture Suffers a Loss

I just <em>found out </em>now that our famous movie and theatre actor Yury Takovlev (had) <em>died yesterday. </em>Everyone knew him <em>and/by </em>his roles in the cult movies The Irony of Fate, Ivan Yasilyevich Changes his Mind and others. RIP. You deserve <em>to be forever remembered. </em>

Good job!