My English

My English is so poor, I don't know how to make my English better. I am so unhappy. English class is so difficult, so I always sleep when the English class is beginning.

Don't be sad! English is a beautiful language and you are in the right place to practise it :)

Today's lunch.

I cooked a Tom yum Gai.(Sour spicy Soup with chicken)
My frend who is Thai told me how to cook and which foods to use.
I told her how to cook Kabutoni.(Simmered head of sea bream with a soy sauce taste)
We could spend a nice time.
Of course it was delicious.

A Postman Didn't Come

Since I heard a rumor that the next generation Kindle release date would be postponed, I decided to buy the current generation Kindle Paperwhite 3g. Then finally, yesterday was the day that my lovely new Kindle was supposed to arrive.

I was really looking forward to it and couldn't focus on working. I checked my letter box again and again, but there was nothing in there. I jotted down tracking numbers on the flip side of a piece of paper, brought it to the post office and asked them to track it but there was no package. That was weird to me because when I checked the website, it said it was delivered in the morning already. At that time, it was 6:30 pm.

In general, it is said that Canadian postmen are lazy delivering. Normally people expect 1 or 2 days delay. I hope I can get it tomorrow.

Are these sentances right or wrong?

The fax machine is used to send written or scanned correspondence 
Scissors are used to cut paper and other things. [Scissors are always plural in English. You can also say 'A pair of scissors']
Sticky tape is used to wrap parcels / stick things together / hang posters.

Well, I've never been to any country in Asia before. I really like Indian songs and something about Kpop and modern asian music.


Well, my dad is a fisherman. I always have eaten seafood all my life. I like it so much mainly prawns and cockles.

Can you give me this thing that is on the set menu?
The waiter is carrying so many glasses and it's kind of dangerous but he is able to do it.
The table cloth is clean and bright.


My marital state is single. My date of birth is 01/05/1992. My sex is male.


We normally buy rice, pasta, detergent, cheese, ham, chicken, milk, beef, toilet paper and more food.

Seasons of the year
IT'S COLD IN WINTER/ THE LEAVES FALL IN AUTUMN/ FLOWERS BLOOM IN THE SPRING

My best friend

Well, I’d like to talk about my friend Lily who was my classmate in grade eleven.

She is a lovely and pretty girl, long black hair always tied in a ponytail, fair skin, and bright eyes. You know, she likes laughing and even a little joke can make her laugh for a while. When I am with her, whatever we are doing or talking, I just feel relaxed and happy.

We were always in the same class. But at the beginning, we were just strangers because at that time, students were more likely to talk with classmates who sat near them. I remember she sat far away from me. In fact, the first time I began to notice her was during a class presentation. After the presentation, I was totally attracted by her eloquent speech and then I really wanted to know her and be her friend. But it seemed to be strange and intended [not sure what word you meant here] to directly ask someone to be your friend, you know, we even didn’t have a talk with each other before. So, we still didn’t become friends until the day of my 17th birthday.

That morning, I received many text messages from my friends saying happy birthday to me. Surprisingly, one of them was from Lily. You know, I couldn’t describe the feeling I had at that time and I just replied and asked her how she knew my phone number. She just replied to me that it’s a snap! Since then, we became best friends, sharing stories with each other, studying and discussing things together, and having late night talks during weekends. She is my ladybro. Now, I still cannot describe how we become best friends, you know, it just happened. Maybe it’s fate and there is nothing better than having such an intimate friend.

I thought this was very good! Just one note - you wouldn't usually use the verb 'discussing' by itself, you would have to say what you were talking about. Either say 'We were discussing school' or 'We were discussing things' but not 'We were discussing'.   You can say 'We were having discussions' though.

Already A Mother

It was when I finished classes and was going back to my home. I was waiting on the street to cross a crosswalk. As always, I just looked around and thought about what I would do with my friend in 30 minutes. Accidentally, I happened to notice a woman looked very similar to me. Big eyes, think make-up, and pink cheeks. She was a person in my memories from middle school. I am not sure if I can call her my friend, we were classmates though. Anyway, I liked her, and I think she must not have disliked me. She sometimes told me about her boyfriends and emphasized that I should be very tricky to pick up 'good' boys. She often kidded with me saying that she was very worried if I was so naive that I might have hard time later. Although I didn't know about her very much, she was a little popular and often hung out with boys. She was pretty and tender-hearted. Once I worried about her because the boys hanging out with her didn't look quite good, but I couldn't give her any advice. I thought she would be mad because I was not that close to her.

At the next semester, I heard some scandals about her at school. They were related to her inappropriate relationships with boys. Some of my friends talked about it and I just listened to them. My friends spoke ill of her, but I really didn't like it so I just left. Even after she got to know that almost everyone always talked behind her back, she did not stop hanging out with the boys. I did not have any chances to talk with her because we were no longer in the same class in Junior school and we soon graduated. However, I had heard some things about her when I was a high school girl. There was a lot of rumors about especially her marriage. According to my friends, she was already married and pregnant so she dropped out of school. I did not believe it and I sincerely wanted that it was not true, but everything was vague.

On the crosswalk. When I saw her, I was so surprised that I stopped walking, but she didn't see me. And, I saw she was not alone. She was with two babies. While I was carrying my bags and books, she was carrying her younger baby on her back and holding the older baby's hand. But, she looked very peaceful and still pretty. People said that she might have been unhappy because she married and got pregnant so recklessly. But, when I was passing by her, I thought people were wrong because nobody can know if she's really happy or not.

I feels strange that she is already a mother, while I am still a student.

This was very good! I changed some things to make them sound more natural in English but it was all understandable regardless