Hi Tim, Here is the correction for one of the sentences : The dogs in cilazapril and valsartan groups were given cilazapril (1mg·kg-1·d-1) and valsartan(30mg·kg-1·d-1) respectively from 1 week before pacing till the pacing was stopped. if this is what you want to say : cilazapril group ---> cilazapril (1mg·kg-1·d-1) valsartan group ---> valsartan(30mg·kg-1·d-1) for a period starting one week before the start of pacing till the end of pacing. Otherwise, the abstract looks fine.