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I‘m from China, and i am a college student. And because of my major, i should communicate with other people who are from other countries. I want to find a friend to talk about the culture and something interesting. And I can teach some simple Chinese to you ^^. 我的skype账号是：Rachel.qqq ，欢迎来加我喔！^^
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    January 24, 2014
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    中国有1.存在很大的问题。这是我第四次作文。2.（这是我的第四篇作文。/这是我第四次写作文）

    我觉得共产党很有意思，尤其是共产党的红色革命历史。我相信没有共产党就没有新中国，但是我真的相信最近政府变得越来越盲目。3.（但是我认为政府最近真的变得越来越盲目。）他们不在乎环境问题，穷人问题，生活问题，社会问题，反而更在乎钱和经济。4.（更在乎金钱/经济发展）现在中国有5.（一个）很大的问题，很多人越来越老。年轻人6.（又）不多。谁以后在工厂工作？7.（以后有谁能在工厂工作？）很大的问题，怎么办？8.（这是一个很大的问题，我们应该怎么办？） 这个情况对我很有意思…9.（我对这个情况很感兴趣。）



    1.If you want to say China has a big problem. You can use the word "存在”, if you use it u can not use   the quantifier.

    2. It is the forth article I write. “第四次” can not be use as a adj. 

    4. The "钱”and“经济” is quite same, u can choose one to write into your article.

    9. The location about the subject and the object is not very well. You can try to change the order about that.

     

    And you're good, keep going.^^

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    January 12, 2014
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    The first day It's the first day i come to my home. I feel a bit happy but bored. Because when i am in the college, i will use a big part of time to study ,but when i go back to home. I suddenly feel that I don't konw what I can do on my winter holiday. Probably I know but i am tired to do that.
    January 11, 2014
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    自我介绍

    我姓班呢特，我叫罗伯特。
    我是英国人。
    我住在纽卡斯尔市。
    我在工厂工作。
    我是个
    实验室技术人员。
    我喜欢读书。
    我喜欢下棋。
    我现在(+正在）学习汉语。

     

    If you want to speak the Chinese which seems more native, you can omit the same object. it's convenient for you to say or write. And your introduction can devide into three parts, the first one is abour your information about your name and nationality and living-place. The second one is about your job, and the final one is about your hobby and what you are doing. so it can be fixed like this:

     

    我姓班呢特，叫罗伯特，是一个英国人，住在纽卡斯尔市。
    我在工厂工作，是个实验室技术人员。
    我喜欢读书，下棋，我现在正在学习汉语。

     

    I'm learing English now.------我现在正在学习英语。 It's wrong to say that 我现在学习英语，it's a kind of mistake like "i'm learn English now."

     

     

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    January 11, 2014
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