Hello Sergej,
This is extremely well written! I enjoyed reading it very much. I can hardly see any room for improvement so I just have a couple of tiny suggestions 😊
Part 1:
“As a teacher for German as a second language” I would change to “as a teacher of German as a second language.”
The last sentence is a little disjointed. I believe you do don’t want to repeat yourself here by saying the same thing twice? You prefer not to say “as a teacher of German as a second language” again so instead you say “as a German teacher as a second language” but unfortunately it does not sound quite right. It might be better to repeat yourself, or completely change the sentence. Maybe you could try: “Similarly, you experience great joy when a child with a migration background is able to form their first sentences in German after a short time.”
Part 2:
Just one small addition for your consideration:
“I can say with conviction that becoming a teacher was the right decision for me.”
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October 23, 2025
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Hi everyone,
My bedtime routine is similar to most people's, like brushing my teeth and then lying on my bed reading books or using my phone to watch the last news and social media.