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Summary: A Streetcar Named Desire
Blanche DuBois, a schoolteacher from Mississippi, arrives at the New Orleans apartment of her pregnant sister Stella Kowalski, who is married with her husband Stanley Kowalski. Blanche tells Stella that she lost their noble home called Belle Reve. Her heavily heavy drinking is a sign that all is not well with Blanche. During the stay at her sister’s apartment, Blanche gets involved in a disagreement between Stella und and Stanley, which ends that with Stanley beats beating Stella up (You don't have to get rid of "up", but it sounds more formal if you do). The two sisters escape to the their neighbor’s apartment, but a short while later Stella returns to Stanley. Blanche tries to convince her sister to leave her husband for a better man whose social status is as equal as equal to Stellas. Blanche dates Mitch who is one of the poker friends from Stanly Stanley's poker friends. At Blanche's birthday, Stanley tells the guests about Blanche's past and also that she lost her job because she had an affair with a teenage student. Mitch broke breaks (don't mix up your tenses) up with her and Stanley's birthday present to her was is a one way ticket back to Mississippi. In On the evening at of her birthday, Blanche sits alone and drunken at home when suddenly Mitch arrived Mitch suddenly arrives. Mitch and tries to have sex with Blanche her. Later, Stanley comes home from hospital and Blanches was is even more drunk. She tells him a story which wasn’t isn't real, but Stanley was is so happy about his baby that he didn’t doesn't mind. Stanley carries her to bed and maybe he possibly rapes her in that night.
Weeks later, a doctor and a nurse arrives and to take Blanche in to an insane asylum, but Blanche believes that she will spend her entire life with a millionaire.0 votedJanuary 7, 20141Bad English Exam Today
Today I had my an English exam and I feel very bad about it. I improve my English with by talking to friends in English class and with by reading different books. But today, I had only had two hours time to write an essay and also listen to complete a listening comprehension task. and Afterwards, I had to write a summary about it. The listening wasn't very difficult to understand and I hope I did it well, but I had the problem that i didn't have enough time to write the essay. I hope my teacher won't think that it's too bad. Futhermore, I hope the next exam I will be quicklier in writing than today that I will be able to write quicker in my next exam than I did today.
0 votedDecember 13, 20130I'm Very Tired
These days, I'm very busy, but I don't know why. Work is as the same as before, and I'm so long not go to the school I haven't been at school for a long time. (Is this what you are trying to say? I am not sure)
I very really want to have more free time to study English.
The other day, I read a book for on how to study English. this is say It says to love English, but how is really do you love english?
who Can somebody tell me?
I feel like I have forgotten some of my English is a lttle forgot these days. So I have to come on ,(I am not sure what you mean here - could you say "So I have to practice more"?)0 votedNovember 13, 20131Written in Red
Today I finished the book "Written in Red" by Anne Bishop. The book it is about a girl called named Meg, who that is a "cassandra sangue". What that means that she is that she is a prophet, who that can see the future through cuts on her skin. But, because of her gift she is targeted by a lot of ambitious people because of her gift. I indicate recommend this book for everyone anybody who likes fantasy and action!
0 votedNovember 13, 20130About Education (a translation exercise)
Such The behavior of some/many(?) Chinese teachers is a great hindrance to students' creativity. (if students is a plural, the possessive apostraphe needs to be at the end. If it is singular, you need to say "a student's) Now, t There is a well-known question; how many uses can you think of for a paper clip? Most students can figure out think of 10 to 15 uses in this test, whilst someone can get think of more.
The test shows that the divergent thinking is different to each person. (These both say each person's thinking is different - a better way of phrasing this sentence would be "The test shows that each individual person's thinking is different") The research group also separated the answerers into different groups by their age. They found that the younger the answerers were (past tense), there will be the less limits of their answers the less limited their answers will be. Additionally, in the aspect of the when assessing adults who have been educated for many years, they found that they have pretty comparatively fewer answers to this question.
People can’t help to think This raises a question; how can the well-educated people not compared to preschoolers why do well-educated adults compare so poorly to preschoolers? Long time ago, people had to walk to the/a banks to deposit and withdraw money. Nowadays These days ATMs have been are located in every corner all around the world.
Science and technology are always continuously progressing, whilst the education is not. (Avoid contractions in formal writing) From Since the beginning of public education in the 19th century, the education system has continued not changed to today. Students enroll in the lowest grade and graduated in the highest grade. (I did not correct enroll as it appears you are using American English. For reference, British spelling only allows the spelling of "enrol") That This seems just like an assembly line. Schools just “produce” students to meet the demands of society. Then, a lot of gifted students of genius lose their potential.
People (who finds this? Do not just say "people", say who finds this e.g. "The institute of... finds", or "... study finds", etc. If unknown, just write, "Researchers find") find that some students make different performance in perform differently at different times and on during different classes. Some students like to study in groups, whilst some like to study alone and quietly. However, schools won’t will not make changes to respond to such situations differences/individuality.
Many people are very angry concerned to find that the syllabuses (another plural is "syllabi", but both can be used) are made from last year’s the same as the previous year's. People are educated under a uniform standard. If everyone can were to be estimated considered respectively/individually(?), maybe the results will may well be different. Examination-oriented education can be seen everywhere but, objectively speaking, that’s there is much less of this orientation in America than in China. Maybe Perhaps this is the reason why there are much so many more American Nobel laureates than Chinese ones.0 votedNovember 12, 20132
