Correcting help me, please
1. According to rapidly growth economic in recent years, weaknesses and backward transportation infrastructure of Viet Nam can't respond to high demand about passengers and commodities transporting.
2. The government has issued a lots of useful remedies in order to reduce pressure in transport system and focused growth public traffic vehicles, limited private traffic vehicles.
3. The government licensed for a little foreign airline so as to raises passengers transport capacity to airline traffic when road and railway traffic are being overloaded.
Hi,
This is very good! There are only a couple of words I would change, and a few tense errors:
1. According to rapidly growth of the economy in recent years, weaknesses and backward transportation infrastructure of Viet Nam cannot respond to a high demand of passengers and commodities transporting.
2. The government have issued multiple useful remedies in order to reduce pressure on the transport system and focused growth of public traffic vehicles and limited private traffic vehicles.
3. The government licensed for a small foreign airline in order to raise passenger transport capacity to airline traffic when road and railway traffic are being overloaded.
Hope that was helpful!
