My hometown

I live in a small town, we call it the 门源. Although there is are no busy streets and or large shopping malls, but here is the we have blue sky and white clouds, no without any pollution. There are large tracts of yellow flowers of rape，you can smell the fragrance to anywhere in the summer. Here is a picture. Do you like it?

In terms of sentence structure remember to always start the sentence with a capital letter and to have a space between your punctuation and the following word. A new sentence starts after a period (.), but not after other kinds of punctuation such as "," or ";" so you do not capitalize the first word after these. An exception to this rule is if its a proper noun, such as someone's name (i.e. Matt), in which case it should be capitalized no matter where it is placed in the sentence.

Also make sure that your verb matches your subject. "Busy streets" tells the reader that there are multiple streets so you use "are" instead of "is."

I'm not really sure of the technical reasons for my other corrections. Sorry... >.<; 

I highlighted "of rape" in blue because I'm not sure what you wanted to say there. "Rape" is a sexual act done without consent, which I don't think is what you were trying to say.

The flowers are beautiful! It must be very nice to live in your hometown!