Life Style

Let´s talk about holidays. I´m from Spain and here it is very common to have many days of holidays holiday days/days off or just bank- holidays. For example, this thrusday Thursday and Friday we have bank holidays and the kids don´t go to to school in all the week, from last monday to next tuesday, amazing right? I think that in for other countries it can sound a little bit weird, and I understand. Maybe this is the problem of Spain's problem/a Spanish problem, maybe we have too much free time and we don´t care about our future. I think that if foreiners foreigners think about Spanish people the first image that came up comes to their minds is parties, and fun...yeah, it´s true! A lot of spanish people don´t care about their career, don´t think about learning another languajes languages and they feel afraid to go abroad and face the situation of speaking in other languaje language or just being far away from their home. I think that I am not a Spanish in this sense because I love traveling all around the world, meeting new people, sharing my culture, learning another languaje language, working hard to reach my targets...this is life for me, facing new challenges and reaching all of them, all the dreams that maybe one day will turn into reality.

Nice work!  Almost perfect, but just a few bits of advice:

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Spanish, Thursday, Friday - nationalities are written with a capital letter as well as countries' names and days of the week, months of the year etc.

Hope this helps! :D

Does Online socializing online has have a bad effect on real communication?

Every single place you go you can see more than one person handling his smartphone or laptop. People mainly use social networks such as Twitter, Facebook or the popular app WhatsApp. I can swear that when I meet my friends, we’re sometimes using our smartphones instead of talking to each others face to facevis-à-vis. Does online communication take us over us? Does it prevent us from relating more to each other in real life?

First of all, speaking through the Internet is not good for shy people, since it makes them more introverted because they avoid facing difficult situations. Not being physically in front of the person you are speaking to makes you say things you would not say otherwise. This temporary relief can marginalize shy people from society because this increases the lack of necessity of getting around it reduces the need to get around (/see people in person?).

Nowadays, "Internet" and lie "lying" has have the same meanings for an amateur netizen: on chats and comments on recent posts, for example. and Furthermore, many social networks are full of fake profiles which could fool us if we talk to them regularly. Online socializing is also making many couples break up because there is a thorough survey in the other one of the couple (<--I'm sorry, I don't understand this part - do you mean "each person is under surveillance from the other"?) and many misunderstandings, but the most important thing is that real communication is being lost. 

For me, online communication is not a real problem if you use it in an adequate way. We just have to know that real communication is more important than faceless conversations.

I hope you could help me if there are many mistakes. Thank you.

My Mind Went Blank

Today, after work, I came home as usual. I did some chores, then turned my computer on. I intended to write an essay from for a course which I am taking now, but I gave up doing the task, since I realized how difficult it was.

Not accomplishing/Not having accomplished what I had planned, I kept surfing the web. However, my mind went blank. I knew that I was in two minds with about a job that I was offered a few days ago.

I already learn learnt that when we haven't yet made up our mind, the best thing we should do is that we get it out of our mind. Later on, when we feel more relaxed, we will hit the jackpot, but there is a saying: "Easier said than done."

My presentation

Hi!! My name is Lara and this is my first redaction composition / notebook entry in on this website. I'm very excited with about this. I hope to learn a lot. I don't know much English. (I hope news- ?? I didn't understand this, sorry!). Byeeee!

My best experience in a restaurant

A few days ago an old partner of the (friend from?) University recommended a restaurant from in Monçao (Portugal).
This That evening my girlfriend and I decided to go to the restaurant of in Monçao. We had a wonderful dinner and the prices weren’t too expensive.

The restaurant is nice, it have has a huge room where there are/ with several tables. There is a great variety of choices. Pizza is their speciality; they serve authentically Italian food. However the diners can order a wide range of meals, from seafood to the most exotic meats. We ordered a pizza for everyone and a delicious fruit salad in the for dessert.

The best place there is a lovely patio with outside seating. They don`t offer free parking but everyone can get a car park parkin space in the street without a problem.

Afterwards we went for a walk in a park of in Monçao.

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