Pleas help me with my writing. I would really appreciate you it

My name is Sepideh., it is a Persian name for girls. The meaning of my name is dawn. I am 25 years old. My job is so very interesting for me. I work in a charity hospital and I am so glad for my position in a/this quality office. Because I do this because I like helping people and increase increasing the quality of hospital services which they achieve. I am believed believe every organization must consider the client’s needs. People come to our hospital with different backgrounds. Some of them are rich and some of them are poor/are poor. I would really like to help the needy patients.

You did very well, but there are a couple of slight problems in your paragraph. One of them is that you sometimes add in words that don't belong in the sentence, such as "which they achieve", "would", and a few others that I didn't mark because to an average English reader, they would seem ok. The next problem that you have in your writing is that your sentences are very short. Reading your paragraph was a very staccato, or abrupt, experience. I would read a few words, and then have to stop. You can fix this by adding in commas (, a comma) to connect two of your sentences together. But to tell the truth, the staccato sentences are quite normal for any beginner of a new language, so if you keep working on it, you'll have your sentences smooth in no time. Send me a message or anything like that if you have more questions.