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Deutsche Woche 07 #01 Wir haben zu suchen Zeit um zu planen.
Wir (add a verb: haben) anscheinend nie genügend Zeit (,) um sorgfältig zu planen die alten Träume (sorgfältig zu planen) , die wir tragen durch unsere Existenz (tragen), (from this part of the phrase on, it barely makes sense. I get the meaning of what you try to say but gramatically it is an accumulation of non existing constructions, basically because it lacks right verbs on the right places)
einige neue Projekte, die wir deutlich machen kann (können) passieren, die nächstfolgenden Schritte wollen wir in das Leben zu nehmen, die geschenke, könnte wir zu geben zu unseren Lieben, vielen worte könnten wir sagen, was wir ändern wollen. Wir konnten tun und Nehmen, und viele Aktionen, die einen wirklichen Unterschied in unserem Leben machen würde.
Aber wir haben so viel mehr zu tun und dies ist die eigentliche Herausforderung.
In einer überwältigenden Welt, es ist (ist es) nicht einfach, Ziele zu definieren, es ist (ist es) nicht leicht, Entscheidungen zu treffen und sich dessen bewusst sein (zu sein), gibt uns ein (einen) Ausgangspunkt.
Jeden Tag haben wir die Zeit nehmen, sich hinsetzen, entspannen und planen unseren Tag.
Von Zeit zu Zeit haben wir die Zeit nehmen, um über das Leben zu denken und die decions wir machen müssen und wir procrastinate.here I do not understand what kind of construction you intend to use. haben + infinitif , does not exist in the form you use it; I guess you want to say : we have to = we should/need; maybe you want to say the following:
Jeden Tag sollten/müssen wir uns zeit nehmen, uns hinsetzen, uns enspannen und unseren Tag planen. Von Zeit zu Zeit sollten wir uns Zeit nehmen, um über das Leben und die Entscheidungen, die noch zu treffen sind, nachzudenken - doch wir schieben es auf/zögern/prokrastinieren (most Germans would not use the last one)
In ein paar Monaten unser Leben wird besser, klarer, intensiver und realer.In ein paar Monaten wird unser Leben besser etc.
0 votedAugust 28, 20132Mein Mittagessen
Für mein (Zum )Mittagessen Ich gehe (ich ) zu das (dem) haus (Haus) von Meine (meiner) Großmutter. ( a perfect Version would be: Zum Mittagessen gehe ich zum Haus meiner Großmutter.)
Auf das Haus mir meine Großmutter gibt Ihren Okra und Mais.
Im Haus / Bei sich zu Hause gibt mir meine Großmutter ...
if you start with a local adverb etc (im Haus), the verb has to be on second place (Im Haus gibt mir meine Großmutter...)
Ich esse das Mais und einige Okra.
...den Mais... (its masculinum)
Das Mais ist nicht sehr gut, aber, das Okra ist sehr gut.
Der Mais...
Nachdem unser Mittagessen wir sprechen über das Essen.
Nach dem Mittagessen or: nach unserem Mittagessen sprechen wir über das Essen. (again: if you start with an averb/preposition (nach dem Mittagessen) the verb has to follow immediately after that
Ich meiner Großeltern danke.
Ich danke meinen Großeltern.
0 votedAugust 28, 20131- short story part 2 Rather pathetic, but without 'renting' souls from time to time we feel artificial. The crux is that we only can enjoy the soul for a short period of time. The conscious can only be separated from the body for a couple of days. Otherwise is will not be accepted by the donator anymore. Moreover its influence is comparable to a drug. If we use the personality to intensively, the charisma which is immanent in every designed human -and of course the beauty -will vanish. This phenomenon results from the fact that a human organism cannot deal with outward perfection and a healthy autonomous essence. Therefore all designed ones pay much attention not to use the provided souls too intensively. I have never used a soul, because I consider this idea to be sick. I lived for 22 years without a real soul. I am modeling, but I am also committed in politics. It is easy to convince people if you have charisma. This charisma is sort of a curse. People believe you everything, but on the other hand I cannot really feel their affection. There is no reciprocity. Sometimes I feel like a doll. Two weeks ago, I made the acquaintance of an attractive and lovable man. One look in my eyes made him fall in love with me. I esteemed him very fascinating and I sort of felt something. Nonetheless, I do not think that it was love , because it is just not possible to feel love as a designed human. As I wanted to experience love I made the decision to borrow a soul. It was a very passionate and fervent one. Every *feeling* I used to have for that man was more intense. I felt as if I was subjected to a rebirth. Every time we went out I felt so lively and exhilarated. After a couple of days I was forced to abandon the soul. It was just too dangerous. Every second I use the soul imperils the perfection. I also noticed that my eyes lost their excellence. The blue was not that splendid anymore. I abandoned the soul and promised myself to never again make use of something comparable. Actually it did not really matter because, as the preponderance of the guys, he was captivated by my perfect looks anyway. He did not even notice the difference. The next few days were terrific. I missed the feeling to be alive.August 28, 201391
- short story , more or less short the curse of perfection The curse of perfection You think perfection is unreachable? It's a myth? I have to disillusion you. Nowadays perfection is indispensable. Today everyone is perfect. We do not abandon anything or anyone to his or her fate. I am perfect. You think I am pretentious? Nope. I just have the biological certitude. I am a designed individual. What this means? Today, in the year 2999 we have various options to influence a fetus. We can design it. Initially we confined ourselves to the design of the outward appearance. We gave our babies blue eyes and an adorable smile etc. But the problem is that humans are not able to control God, destiny, or however you would call it. Our designing game was interrupted by complications: The designed babies looked adorable, but one soon noticed that they had a special *personality*. All of the babies were lethargic and apathetic. They never cried, they never complained, they did not seem to be alive at all. As a ramification one scrutinized them and found out, that the designing procedure affected the socializing process. One prognosticated that the children would never be autonomous, that they would never have an attitude or an own opinion. Subsequently one wanted to abandon the project, until one noticed the mesmerizing effect the babies got as soon as they grew up. Their beauty was astonishing. Therefore one was not able to stop the designed babies’ production. Nowadays the technology offers other solutions. As you can imagine there is still no equality. The discrepancy between prosperous people and the ones living on the subsistence level has increased. But nowadays poor people have the opportunity to earn money by *soul prostitution*. It is a hard word, but that is exactly what they do: The make money by providing their souls. It is a complicated process to *extract* certain neurons which have been disclosed to be responsible for emotions and the conscious. Then former designed babies have the chance to 'rent' it for a certain time. Of course it is not obligatory. Our beauty is always accompanied by charisma and a good karma. People love designed humans. The lack of personality is not important. Nonetheless many of us want more. We feel as if were are incomplete therefore we use the provided soul service. (..)August 28, 201341
