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Ich heiße Justin. Ich Komme aus California. Mein Deutsch ist nicht sehr gut, aber ich will es verbessern. "Das Leben ist eine Fremdsprache. Alle Menschen sprechen es falsch aus." I'd like to become fluent. I want to speak German as well as Christoph Waltz speaks English :) Let's talk! See ya around!
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    Sind die beide Sätze richtig? "Im See befinden sich zwei Inseln." "Es gibt zwei Inseln im See." If so, which phrase is more common? Danke!
    September 2, 2013
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    short story part 2

    Rather pathetic, but without 'renting' souls from time to time we feel artificial. The crux is that we only can can only enjoy the soul for a short period of time. The conscious consciousness can only be separated from the body for a couple of days. Otherwise is it will not no longer be accepted by the donator donor anymore. Moreover, its influence is comparable to a drug. If we use the personality too intensively, the charisma which is immanent in every designed human -and of course as well as the beauty -will vanish. This phenomenon results from the fact that a human organism cannot deal with outward perfection and a healthy autonomous essence. Therefore all designed ones pay much attention are careful not to use the provided rented souls too intensively. I have never used a soul, because I consider this the idea to be sick. I've lived for 22 years without a real soul. I am modeling, but I am also committed in politics. It is easy to convince people if that you have charisma. But This charisma is sort of a curse. People believe you everything you say, but on the other hand I cannot really feel their affection. There is no reciprocity. Sometimes I feel like a doll. Two weeks ago, I made the acquaintance of an attractive and lovable man. One look into my eyes made him fall in love with me. I esteemed found him very fascinating and I sort of felt something. Nonetheless, I do not think that it was love , because it is just not possible to feel love as a designed human. As I wanted to experience love, I made the decision to borrow a soul. It was a very passionate and fervent one. Every *feeling* I used to have for that man was more intense. I felt as if I was were subjected to a rebirth. Every time we went out I felt so lively and exhilarated. Alas, After a couple of days I was forced to abandon the soul. It was just too dangerous. Every second I use the soul imperils the perfection. I also noticed that my eyes lost their excellence brilliance. The blue was not that splendid anymore. I abandoned the soul and promised myself to never again make use of something comparable do such a thing. Actually, it did not really matter because, as the preponderance of the it tends to be with guys, he was captivated by my perfect looks anyway. He did not even notice the difference. The next few days were terrific. I missed the that feeling to be of being alive.

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    August 31, 2013
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    short story , more or less short the curse of perfection

    The curse of perfection

    You think perfection is unreachable Unatainable? It's Is it a myth? I have to disillusion you. Nowadays perfection is indispensable. Today everyone is perfect. We do not abandon anything or anyone to his or her fate. I am perfect. You think I am pretentious? Nope. I just have the biological certitude. I am a designed individual. What this means does this mean? Today, in the year 2999 we have various options a myriad of ways to influence the development of a fetus. We can design it. Initially we confined ourselves to the design of the outward appearance. We gave our babies blue eyes and an adorable smile, etc (perhaps spell the entire word "etcetera"?). But the problem is that humans are not able to control God, destiny, or however you would call it. Our little designing game was interrupted by complications: The designed babies looked adorable, but one we soon noticed that they had a special showed rather peculiar *personality* traits . All of the babies were eerily lethargic and apathetic. They never cried. They never complained. They did not seem to be alive at all. As a ramification one scrutinized them they were heavily scrutinized, and it was discovered that the designing design procedure affected the socializing process process of socialization. One prognosticated The prognosis was that the children would never be autonomous, that they would never have develop an attitude or an own opinion anything resembling an opinion. Subsequently one wanted to abandon the project we thought that the project should be abandoned, until one noticed we started to notice the mesmerizing effect attributes the babies got took on as soon as they grew up. Their beauty was astonishing. Therefore For that reason one was we were not able to stop the designed babies’ production production of designed babies. Nowadays Today, the technology offers other solutions. As you one can imagine there is still no true equality. The discrepancy gap between prosperous people and the ones those living on the subsistence level has increased. But nowadays poor people the poor now have the opportunity to earn money by through *soul prostitution*. It is a hard harsh word term, but that is exactly what they do:
    They make money by providing renting out their own souls. It is a complicated process to *extract* certain neurons which have been disclosed to be the particular neurons that have been found to be responsible for emotions and the conscious consciousness. Then former designed babies have the chance to 'rent' it for a certain time. Of course it is not obligatory. Our beauty is always accompanied by charisma and a good karma. People love designed humans. The lack of personality is not important. Nonetheless many of us want more. We feel as if were are incomplete, therefore and so we use the provided soul service. (..)

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    August 30, 2013
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    Ich habe noch viele Dinge zu lernen Ich bin der einzige in meinen Familie, der Deutsch sprechen kann. Ich werde täglich besser, aber ich habe noch viele Dinge zu lernen. Danke für deine Hilfe! Bis bald!
    August 26, 2013
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    Wann sagt man "dort" lieber als "da"? Thanks!
    August 24, 2013
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    Wie sagt man auf Deutsch "would you be interested in being my language partner?" Danke!
    August 17, 2013
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    Memrise.com is good for vocabulary Duolingo.com is good for grammar. Both are free!
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    August 14, 2013
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    Wie sagt man auf Deutsch "What part of Germany are you from?" Or, alternatively, how do you say "Where in Germany are you from?"
    August 14, 2013
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    August 13, 2013
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