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I'm from the Northeast region of the US, and am a native English speaker. I twist balloon sculptures of all sizes, and do face/body painting. I like interacting with people, and helping if it is needed. I started visiting italki to help people get a better understanding of English.
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    Family trip

    Today I went to the beach with my family.  Though,I have gone to the beach for many times, I felt more happy this time, because my brother traveled with us, haha.  My brother is humours humorous and funny.  He always makes fun with us and I like him.  (The first part of this sentence is repetitive.  You can make the statement "I like him" be a sentence on it's own, or add a comma after funny and add it to the previous sentence.)
    The beach is beautiful, but the seawater is salty.  Wwe played in the sea.  At the begainning, I was afraid of the sea waves, but after awhile I enjoyed them gradually,haha. Then we went to have dinner.  I tasted many delicious and special (delicious and special are adjectives, try adding what you ate.  Ex.  many delicious and special foods, ... ), so I am very full now.
    Today I was very tired, but happy.  I liked the interesting trip, and I like to travel with my family very much.  Most importantly, I love my family, hahahahaha...

     

    Your trip to the beach sounded like a lot of fun!!

    There are a few things to remember:

    1) Put spaces after periods and commas.  (One space after a comma, and two after a period). 

    2) Plurals.  There are several exceptions to this rule, but most words have a "s" or "es" after to show when it's more than one.  ex. wave or waves. 

    3) a little note between American English, and British English.  Some words are spelled slightly differently.  ex.  American:  humorous, British: humourous.  Amer.: color, Br: colour.  It depends on where you are, and which one you are learning. 

    I hope this helps.

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    Very close to yueer-19's answer. Remove the but, and make enjoy past tense - enjoyed. "Thank you for your hospitality" can be a separate sentence.
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    You could state "in case the user ...." without the where or when. Or you could also state "when the user .... " without stating in case.
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    On your side sounds like te correct answer.
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